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4/1/2020 c12 2CaseTangent
I LIKE IT. And I am RELIEVED SOMEONE FINALLY GOT THEIR PERSONALITIES RIGHT.
5/20/2019 c14 4Lord Geovanni
I hope at some point you are able to return to this story. It looks so good and yet there is a massive gap between the last upload and now. It is even more disappointing that your author note suggests that the story is finally getting onto Sigma's Rebellion. Not that I was disappointed at all regarding the story thus far, but I was also eager to see how you write the games.

I would also like, if at all possible, a small scene covering how X's friends coped with Tony's death. I know Sam would have a bit of story alone, but currently it feels like X just up and dropped them after Tony was killed. I know that doesn't fit X's personality, but I believe the story could use some exploration into that aspect of these characters.
1/6/2019 c1 1Turb0K1dd0
Wow. I just wrapped up with this story, and holy bejeezus, this was just straight up fun to read. For starters, I know that there is a lot of filler near the beginning, but X, his friends, and Dr. Cain are written so well I don’t even care about all the filler. Even so, I think it presents a reasonable slow start to the series. But when Zero hits the scene? Oh boy, oh boy. I saw his first few lines before and after his fight with Sigma. This is just the story I like to read, and it saddens me that this story is probably dead.
11/21/2018 c14 Glisetosherbrooke
Is this story dead? It was getting pretty good...
6/23/2018 c14 Anonymous
I miss this story
6/5/2018 c14 LW.exe
Wow, its been a long time since I read this fanfic. A lot happened.

I really love how you write the friendship of X and Zero! I like how you write them in general.
3/20/2018 c9 apples in the rain
Unanimous character declaration is that anyone with an opinion contrary to yours is an idiotic asshole, so please don't be offended? *raises an eyebrow* No, I'm not offended, but if your not trying to give offense you might want to start by not throwing insults. Offense leads to more offense; respect encourages respect. :)

Anyways. Yep, novelizations have been done before. It's been some time since I've last read one though, and just this past week I found myself itching to read someone else's spin. This has been a treat to find. Thanks! :D

On a whole, I found the earlier chapters of your story a little bland. There's a lot of summarizing events, explaining this and that. While there definitely are times when you just need to sum up, it's more engaging to see characters interact. Like what you're doing a lot more of now.

Zero is a blast to read. Vain, doesn't listen, enjoys ripping things up as much as a good cat... ;)

And I must say, I was pleasantly surprised at the extra dialogue you added to his fight with Sigma. :3

On the names of the doctors cutting out, by any chance are you writing Dr. Cain without a space after the dot? If so, that's probably the problem, and a pretty simple edit.

All the best, hope to see your writing grow. :)
3/7/2018 c1 W4R M4CH1NE 2099
Really awesome. Keep it up.
2/25/2018 c14 Guest
I LOVE THIS I LOVE ZERO AND X I JUST LOVE THIS SOOOO MUCH AGHHH PLEASE CONTINUE TO WRITE MORE I LOVE YOU HUMAN
2/25/2018 c13 Guest
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW I'M DYING
2/25/2018 c12 Guest
Only thing I noticed was the use of "feint" where you should have had "faint".
Other than that, nicely done!
2/25/2018 c8 Guest
ZEEEEEEERRRRROOOOOO
THE OTHER HALF OF MY OTP HAS APPEARED THANK YOU
2/25/2018 c6 Guest
So.
I'm only on chapter 6.
Love your style!
But I freaking LOVE Zero so you know who I'm waiting for...
2/6/2018 c14 1OZHunter
I’m so happy to see this stories back! I’ve loved reading it so far, and this chapter was worth the wait in all honesty. I love the level of detail put into describing the characters and their actions, what they’re doing, their environments, it all helps set the mood. This establishment of X and Zeros normal Maverick Hunter life before everything goes haywire is great, this portrayl of their characters is so interesting to read and I’d love to see more of it. Poor Sigma has to deal with this guys on a daily basis, no wonder he went Maverick lol. Still it’s nice to see the shift back to normalcy after the heavy previous chapter. Speaking of which that chapter was great, and it was great to see the first dark signs this story would get heavy, for those who aren’t familiar with the MMX franchise. Overall this chapter was great, it was very loghthearted and fun, and enjoyable to read. It’s one of those chapters people will come back and read when this story gets so sad or these characters begin to grow, and they want to be reminded of their younger years and how everything was way back when. This will definitely be a chapter I come back to. Overall this chapter is great, there isn’t anything wrong with it or anything I can critique on. Keep up the great work, and I look forward to future updates!
2/3/2018 c14 Guest
14 chapters in and you have not even finished the first game?
This will never be finished.
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