2/21/2019 c1 7Anna30148
The rankings for Quinn, Mcgee, and Torres are all messed up. SSA is what Gibbs is, and, anyway, Torres and Quinn shouldn't be outranking Bishop at all, she's been there longer. Gibbs is an SSA, Mcgee is a Special Agent (Senior Field Agent), and Quinn, Bishop, and Torres are Special Agents (Field Agents). Depending on when this takes place, Quinn and Torres may be JFA's (Junior Field Agents), a.k.a. Probies.
The rankings for Quinn, Mcgee, and Torres are all messed up. SSA is what Gibbs is, and, anyway, Torres and Quinn shouldn't be outranking Bishop at all, she's been there longer. Gibbs is an SSA, Mcgee is a Special Agent (Senior Field Agent), and Quinn, Bishop, and Torres are Special Agents (Field Agents). Depending on when this takes place, Quinn and Torres may be JFA's (Junior Field Agents), a.k.a. Probies.
12/27/2017 c18 7Cole Ortiz
Loved this chapter especially the interrogation scene. Great references to hyocine pentothal and this was one of the best interrogation scenes I've read, too bad Holly wasn't made to suffer more but great how Jack shot her in the knees and shoulder after the interrogation was over.
Great that Sarkissian is appearing again. He's a great villain and very evil for threatening Ellie's baby's life. I had a similar idea in one of my past stories.
Loved this chapter especially the interrogation scene. Great references to hyocine pentothal and this was one of the best interrogation scenes I've read, too bad Holly wasn't made to suffer more but great how Jack shot her in the knees and shoulder after the interrogation was over.
Great that Sarkissian is appearing again. He's a great villain and very evil for threatening Ellie's baby's life. I had a similar idea in one of my past stories.
12/18/2017 c18 TnJAGAz
Looks good - like the drug interrogation for Holly - if you're a bad
guy you should expect to be treated roughly.
Looks good - like the drug interrogation for Holly - if you're a bad
guy you should expect to be treated roughly.
11/22/2017 c17 TnJAGAz
Wow, good slam-bang action, too bad about Quinn, but at least Remy got it in the end.
My guess is Jack will do 'scorched earth' until he finds Bishop.
Good job. :)
Wow, good slam-bang action, too bad about Quinn, but at least Remy got it in the end.
My guess is Jack will do 'scorched earth' until he finds Bishop.
Good job. :)
11/16/2017 c15 Cole Ortiz
Nice twist with who Sarkissian's daughter is! This is a great 24 and NCIS style story and Jack Gibbs is a great character.
Nice twist with who Sarkissian's daughter is! This is a great 24 and NCIS style story and Jack Gibbs is a great character.
11/16/2017 c13 Cole Ortiz
Great chapter. Jack Gibbs should definitely be the one to interrogate Emerson.
Great chapter. Jack Gibbs should definitely be the one to interrogate Emerson.
10/29/2017 c13 Guest
Please update soon, I like your story
Please update soon, I like your story