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12/8/2020 c30 58Zm93
Great chapter yet again
12/8/2020 c30 3calborghete
Wow, good chapter, it's really good to see Shinji in that place again, after all that happened after all.

I look forward to the end of the story.
9/14/2020 c29 James Birdsong
Good new chapter
8/29/2020 c29 calborghete
Very good chapter, I liked everything, Shinji and Sakura was an unexpected moment, but I liked it a lot and I hope you both are happy.

Looking forward to the next chapters
5/30/2020 c28 58Zm93
Good story
5/20/2020 c28 Guest
man not to toot my own horn but I called arbiter plan.. interested to see where this goes
5/20/2020 c28 James Birdsong
Nice two chapters. :)
5/19/2020 c7 Guest
I guess for now we have no idea how shinji got into space then. I wonder though. How did humanity survive third impact? (maybe because it was an Eva angel hybrid) and also, how would they know he was reforming and then think shinji in space could be “a trick from commander Ikari”? Did Ikari just go to space to put one in there or something?
5/19/2020 c28 7Abusamadres-Sama
oh god, this is getting very fidgety the final battle is coming I can feel it.
5/18/2020 c28 3calborghete
Hello buddy, how are you? I loved the chapter, this new challenge that is in Shinji's back is very risky, I'm looking forward to the unfolding and the next chapters :-)
5/10/2020 c27 7Abusamadres-Sama
Very good story, I hope you update it soon, I was captivated by the type of continuation you gave 3.0 Although there is something that does not fit me, why would you make a pairing with Shinji and Sakura? I mean, I don't know if you investigated well but ... Sakura is canonically 22 years old. So in my opinion it is unusual and new. But I hope it does not affect you much, it was not your fault I did not see that information. Or maybe you will change it as you go through the story and give Shinji a partner to make him happy. See you bro, if you want you can go on to read my 3.0 fanfic translated by: Google Translate
3/11/2020 c27 20jcmoorehead
Really nice flow in this chapter, some really good building between the pilots. Loved the little sections with Mari being her flirty self too but then becoming serious when it mattered. It was also really nice, and again shows Shinji's continued growth when he actually sat down to tell them what was happening, rather than just hiding it.

That ending though, really strong ending and makes me hotly anticipate the next chapter. Cannot wait to see where you go from here!
3/9/2020 c26 jcmoorehead
The problem with what Gendo wants, is you can never really tell what it is Gendo wants, he'll likely have a contingency plan for his contingency plan :P

I'm glad this ended the way it did, with what I hope is a reconciliation between the sides. This Arbiter project is certainly still at the forefront of my mind in regards to what they want/expect from Shinji for it and just what it is. Again I'm really concerned for Shinji here as there is some clear manipulation by others to get him into a certain position. Still hopefully they can all communicate well, that is the key.

Great chapter, what I liked here was the flow between the scenes and the interrogation, it felt like it was just long enough in each sequence, sometimes people have these interrogation style sequences going on for far too long. Nearly caught up now, looking forward to the next chapter :)
3/9/2020 c25 jcmoorehead
Kinda feel bad for Asuka missing out on the party, I guess that's the way she is and that's what she wants to do, but I also feel that she is a part of that crew, she should definitely be there.

Really enjoyed the scenes between Kaji/Misato here, built a lot of tension and intrigue. I'm still wondering what this Arbiter project is, and also wondering who is/isn't the good guy in the situation. I don't like to think Kaji/Burke are manipulating Shinji for a negative reason, I don't really like to think they're manipulating him at all but it is clear they are and that's going to cause a world of hurt when it is finally revealed because it's clear he trusts them.

Shinji has very clearly grown a lot here, his interaction with Joanna and Asuka were great. He still feels very much like Shinji but he has grown too, great work on that development.

Looking forward to the next one :)
3/9/2020 c24 jcmoorehead
Fantastic chapter, really action packed and again flowed so well. Will admit, got more than a little bit nervous when Shinji started to push his sync rate! Will be interesting to see the fallout from this one, Shinji piloting was a huge risk and I can imagine it'll have rustled more than a few feathers. I imagine there might be a few who react somewhat unfavourably to him after this too.

Looking forward to the next one, hoping to have caught up as soon as possible.
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