8/16/2017 c2 220celrock
Aw, nice chapter, and glad Doc's mother is going to go explain Madeline's condition of why she'll get numbness in her leg sometimes to her the following day. Also, I knew Doc had a little brother named Donny, but I don't recall a sister named Dory. Is Dory your OC?
Aw, nice chapter, and glad Doc's mother is going to go explain Madeline's condition of why she'll get numbness in her leg sometimes to her the following day. Also, I knew Doc had a little brother named Donny, but I don't recall a sister named Dory. Is Dory your OC?
5/8/2017 c1 193LoveLikeElena
Hola! I loved the beginning of this story! I don't know what to think of Doc's older sister yet. I like Maya better. I could hear Kiara as Doc as I read it!
Hola! I loved the beginning of this story! I don't know what to think of Doc's older sister yet. I like Maya better. I could hear Kiara as Doc as I read it!
3/8/2017 c1 50Niagara14301
A wonderful beginning to this wonderful story. I'm looking forward to reading more.
A wonderful beginning to this wonderful story. I'm looking forward to reading more.