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2/17 c3 Guest
Great fic, I liked how you wrote the characters, and the story war really giod
6/11/2020 c3 22Miko Eiko
Fue divertido
3/22/2020 c3 Prisma19
I love these two, they are so funny and enjoyable to read. I love their friendship and the trouble they get into on their adventures.
10/29/2017 c3 15Northoftheroad
Hi there,

You understand that I have never read Super sons and hardly anything else with Jon, and my experience with Damian comes almost completely from when he’s shared the spotlight with Dick, so you will have to take my thoughts for what they are worth.

For a starter, I like the introduction, with the surrounding enemies turning out to be a friendly poker game! That's a nice surprise for the reader!

When it comes to Damian, I’m not sure I see Damian ”sigh”, or use words like ”Gee, thanks, doc” or ”See, (the space)…” or ”har-de-har”.
I recognise his mindset in your story better than how he sounds; like looking for kryptonite weapons in the Batcave, or deciding to study more poker statistics, ordering Jon around and planning for crime-fighting activities sounds very Damian. But in my mind, he wouldn’t express himself like that. And sighing seems a bit too human...
In my mind, Damian is succinct, often on the rude/sarcastic side. I can see him use unnecessary, difficult words to make people understand how superior he is, yes, but not small "filler" words. ("Just to show you I am not impervious to pop culture" sounds about right:-) )
Still, as I said, I don't read Teen Titans or Super sons, so I don't know how Damian is portrayed at the moment.

I think you’re not a native English speaker? Neither am I, I should say, but I see quite a lot of small grammatical errors. For instance, I’m pretty sure it should be ”My father and I are used to many sleepless nights”, and ”You didn’t give me many options”, and ”that’s Mr Kent to you”. I don’t know if you can find a grammar check in whatever program you’re writing or some online service?

I hope you felt my thoughts were some help, and I hope you will continue to enjoying writing!
10/23/2017 c2 20The BatThing
You're doing great. Wish I had advice, but this is pretty damn good characterization. :D
10/23/2017 c1 The BatThing
Dude, you don't need help! Damian is great and I love Jonathan Kent;) I'm all over their comic, though hate that DC is correlating Batman and Supes so much. I gotta get over that. :) few misspellings, but that shit happens. Onto ch. 2
8/1/2017 c3 Gin
Wow. This is simply an amazing story. And yes of course you should write another stories with Damian and Jon on it. I don't really care who the enemies are. Hey, maybe You could make another sleepover in Damian's house? *grin*

Btw, how about write this in Superman x Batman crossover? If I didnt search on google, I wouldnt know this fic even exist. Damian and Jon's stories are hard to find in fanfiction. I suggest you upload this (and another Robin Superboy stories) in Ao3.
6/24/2017 c3 fj89
LOVE! This reminded me so much of the Super Sons comic! Wouldn't be surprised if it was an actual storyline! You characterization of the boys was spot on! Will you write more fics like this? BTW, why did Jon mentioned what his name was?
6/24/2017 c3 fj89
LOVE! This reminded me so much of the Super Sons comic! Wouldn't be surprised if it was an actual storyline! You characterization of the boys was spot on! Will you write more fics like this?
6/24/2017 c2 fj89
Dang. I doubt Batman would've grabbed them by the ears. RIP Robin and Superboy.
6/24/2017 c1 fj89
OMG that's so cute! Instantly fangirled with the anime, especially when you mentioned the Thousand Sunny! One Piece does exist!
6/24/2017 c3 62janahjean
enjoyed this tremendously
4/27/2017 c3 15RoseVered
Loved it! Please continue, I would so like to read more!

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