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1/28/2018 c4 Guest
I think Louie will have a competition with the dryad
7/15/2017 c1 Guest 16
Should the Dryad silblings call the Pikmin something else? becuse Olimar gave them that name so they would have some other name for there specie.
7/8/2017 c3 20kingalex1234
I loved this chapter, though I had expected it to be longer at first. Actually, all things considered, I think you left it off at a good place, though this would be considered a filler chapter more than anything.

I loved the cooking scene, Lily is adorable! I love her character! I also loved the scene with Derpy, she'll be a great source of comic relief!

keep writing, I'm eager to see your next chapter!
6/30/2017 c1 6Tindle
This reminds me of my first few attempts at writing fanfiction.

It's not great, but it's also far from bad, just keep plugging along, ok? You can only get better from practice!
6/26/2017 c2 20kingalex1234
Awesome second chapter! I liked the details you put into the fight scenes (even if it was a bit brutal), and I loved the scene with the Wogpole! I felt the rest of the chapter was a bit rushed by comparison, though.

While it's true that a good story generally has a villain, it's not always needed. In fact, the pikmin games don't really have a main villain, it's kinda like nature, where you're the prey for literally everything.

Anyways, great chapter, can't wait to read more!
6/17/2017 c1 kingalex1234
great start! I'm glad to see another pikmin fic being worked on! I feel as though it was a bit rushed, but I don'tblame you, my first fic was roughly the same way.

the chapter was a bit hard to read due to it being a big block of text, something you might consider working on in the future. other than that, i loved it, and can't wait to read more!
6/14/2017 c1 3Geno Kantaro
I'm so, so sorry, everyone. I forgot to remove the word mark. Please just ignore it and keep reading.

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