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12/15 c9 Yuu igdrasil
I like this story im a huge dragon fan so this story is made for me i love how your gonna go for the kamen rider style story
11/9 c19 zenacufarov
NOOOO! JUST NOT PENNY! GUMBALL! SAVE HER IMMEDIATELY!
11/7 c19 SkipperDoe
This is becoming more intense, i hope you will not start to use Penny as the damsel on distress in abuse, but maybe you gonna explore the origin of her race race i think.

I'll wait the next chapter with eager, but with patience too. Take your time on the writing.

P.S. Are you open to ideas of suggestions for the story?
9/10 c18 4Villicus
Man that first segment was brutal, but nothing less expected especially after the first ever chapter. Really excited to see the eventual confrontation, and I do feel sad for everyone else in the dark about Gumball's fate. I'm very curious to see if Carrie will figure it out, though.

As always, keep up the good work. Pax tecum.
6/24 c17 Ms. Sleepy Clover
Calling it now, Penny will inevitably be a Damsel-in-Distress for Gumball to rescue.
6/7 c16 DaniJIE
This is one of the few fan stories that respects the humor of the series and gives Gumball a character development without falling for OOC.

As well as integrating a character like Alaska that adapts well in humor, but be serious when it corresponds to the situation as it happens with the other characters.

This story adapts humor well and balances the personalities of the characters well to serious situations.

How I wish that was done in other Gumball stories.

Bye.
4/9 c16 Ms. Sleepy Clover
Hmm, is Gumballs family gonna get like badass power suits or something to help fight? Cuz woah, that would be fucking badass.
Plus Gumball, you do realize it is just as cheesy by calling out the fact that your line is cheesy.
4/9 c14 Ms. Sleepy Clover
"But it all changed, when the Fire Nation attacked."
4/5 c16 Villicus
The exposition continues! And the lore is revealed at last, though I'm sure that's not all.
2/2 c15 Villicus
Great to see you back. Powerful passages you've got here, really driving home the aftermath of the previous chapters.
1/11 c1 Ms. Sleepy Clover
Dun'nun had the same idea Revan did in The Old Republic.
10/15/2019 c14 Villicus
Short chapter, but understandable. Excited to finally get into this world, honestly. Intriguing enough, and makes me very eager for the next chapter already. Only criticisms are that it could do with a spelling and grammar check, as quite a few of them are present. Other than that, no problems here.
9/25/2019 c13 Campfire the great
Please make more. Chapters to everest gone missing or please tell us what happened to everest! Please it's just not that you can take your time but I just really need another chapter but also you are great with what you do and we all want some more of all of your work. Don't think about what bad comments you have our what things might have happened. JUST DO WHAT YOU LOVE TO DO AND YOU'LL BE HAPPY!...
8/20/2019 c13 Villicus
Welcome back, and thank you for this awesome update! I was concerned that the story would go the way of Gumball and Alaska living separately from everyone else, but I'm glad they chose not to. I'm also really looking forward to the world you've built outside TAWoG, as I was entranced by it from the very first chapter.

Onwards and upwards. Pax tecum.
8/15/2019 c1 1JuicyFruitKevlar
Wait, so does that mean the state Alaska is actually a dragon?
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