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6/30/2017 c1 38ChocolateTeapot
Great work! It fits Mage most excellently. The plot is really interesting, as is the setting. The academic language and the many quotations work brilliantly.

The many stages of the heist are exciting to read. Great descriptions of the traps in Tytalus' vault, the flower, and the creation of the child. I laughed at Pare's lament.

I love Euclid announcing his proof. It feels a bit early for set theory, but this is pretty vulgar magic anyway.

The battle and the arguments surrounding it were really well done. The aftermath is really interesting too.

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