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10/20/2020 c6 11AutumnKrystal
Yeeeees, a story about Marko! I love that guy
10/9/2020 c6 2Fairydoll
Just read through all of the chapters. I really like your story, I hope you update it soon! :)
9/19/2020 c6 3TishaLiz
I can’t wait for more
9/19/2020 c6 8cwsquared
I am intrigued on how this is going to play out and can't wait for the next chapter.
9/11/2020 c2 16i am cloud
I low-key (okay, high-key) ship Cheryl and Star, even though I know that this will be a Cheryl x Marko fic. Knowing me, I'll probably ship them, too.
9/10/2020 c6 kittykat6625
awesome chapter thanks for updating i enjoyed more moments with Cheryl and the lost boys. this story so far is amazing cant wait to find out what happens next please update soon

love kittykat6625
9/8/2020 c1 i am cloud
I love Josephine. She's the kind of light that I think Cheryl needs: a presence that's warm, a little weird, and marches to the beat of her own drum.

If I'm lucky enough to grow old, I'd be happy if I was a fraction of the person Josephine is.
8/29/2020 c4 12WriteToEscapeReality1309
I really love how the Boardwalk is described, even though it appears normal- with how she points out there's crowds of people relaxing and enjoying their time, I can certainly feel an eeriness in the atmosphere, especially when the depictions of the dim lit parking spaces came up. But it was good to see how Cheryl overcame her discomfort and light up when she entered the comic book store. And lol I wonder if Cheryl's opinion on werewolves being more cool will change after she meets the lost boys? And talking about meetings, oh my my my! I do wonder who this blond curly haired boy with the Cheshire grin is? ;)
8/26/2020 c5 Annie
Wow this is a fantastic lead up to a proper meeting between Marko and Cheryl! Love it. Even better is the growing friendship between Star and Cheryl. So often Star is ignored or hated so good on you for featuring her. Great sense of malice in the Santa Carla air as you write it. Looking forward to the next chapter!
8/25/2020 c3 WriteToEscapeReality1309
Another great couple of chapters! I'm really am enjoying Cheryl. For the situation that she's in, just having lost her family and moving to a while different place with someone she doesn't really know, I would've expected she'd be a more angsty/mad at the world teenage character cliche. But her maturity and the way she tries to understand and warm up to her great aunt, choosing to get along with all this change rather than be bitter about what she's lost, is really refreshing! And I just love Josephine and all her eccentricness, I think her whimsical personality bodes well with Cheryl's chill and reserved vibes lol
Also, now moving on to chapter 3, I loved the line where Cheryl's like 'maybe some of my aunt's personality is rubbing off on me'? And I can't wait to see more of her friendship with Star! As I said before I don't know anything about The Lost Boys, but there's something surely mysterious about Star and I'm excited to see what that is!
8/24/2020 c5 9cherrylips1960
Hey do you know when you’ll update again :) can’t wait to see what happens. :)
8/24/2020 c1 12WriteToEscapeReality1309
Hello, I'm Tori and I've chosen your story for the Revirew Exchange :)

This is such a great introductory chapter! I honestly never seen the movie before and my knowledge of The Lost Boys is slim to none (all I know is it’s an 80s film and has vampires lol), so this is an all-around new story for me. And I really enjoyed it!
Your writing is wonderful, first of all. It’s just the first chapter, not even halfway into it, and I’m already connecting to Cheryl’s character.
I loved how you described her thoughts and feelings as she was riding the taxi. The descriptions were perfect, too! I actually didn’t see that Santa Clara ‘Murder Capital’ thing coming so my reaction to that was the same as Cheryl’s lol! I also liked the shared background on Aunt Josephine as well and seeing as Cheryl describes her as an odd character, I wonder if there’s more to her than meets the eye?
8/23/2020 c5 Guest
Ahh no! Why must it end there!?
8/19/2020 c5 Cosmo39
I’m loving this build up to their first meeting, I can’t wait. Also her friendship with Star is so cute, I really like that you’re giving a bit of an insight into Stars character too. Is she already a half vampire here or just living with the boys?
8/16/2020 c5 kittykat6625
thankyou for updating this chapter was really good i loved the fact that Cheryl finally has come face to face with the four lost boys, i am curious to see what happens next with Cheryl and the lost boys and their interactions with eachother please update soon

love kittykat6625
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