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for My Heart Was Home Again--(Sequel to Selected Twins)

7/30 c47 mnbvcxz-xx
Hey Shades! Thank you for the update! Hope you’re doing well :)

I’m honestly surprised Eleanor made it much longer than I thought! I mean.. now with just 5 girls left.. wow

It’s definitely getting complicated for Wes. I feel like on one side he’s also giving it a try and already developed feelings with each girls, however I can see he’s still hesitating a lot. It must be difficult too as Lisa’s in the picture.. ish and he has had such deep feelings with her. I honestly have no idea how the story would end up.

I’m looking forward to see Veyra in a princessy setting with Wes. I think this would be something new and interesting to see. I have a feeling she might do better than anticipated, but we’ll see.

Loved the cliffhanger at the end btw. Can’t wait to see what’s gonna happen now that Wes knows about the Berlins.

P.S. I will never get tires of eating five star hotel food! Lol
4/7 c45 Part 2
Once again INSUBMITTED TOO EARLY OOPS
But the Vera part?
HER REACTION! So complex and the continuing of those subtle subtle plot lines they’ve been having
Doesn’t sound familiar AT ALL but I loved your take on that part
A MAKEOUT? What’s this? BUT BRO it was so good the tension becoming emotion and leading to that MASTERFUL
Also georgia not liking Fallon’s elimination INTERESTING does she like Wesley? What’s that about IN HERE FOR IT
then the subtle reminder of Lissa again at the end? How good was that SO GOOD!
4/7 c45 Delov
I cant login any more idk

This chapter is pure gold I LOVED IT but only just now getting around to reviewing oops. Like how did you have every single plot line in this chapter visible and developing and good? Masterpiece.
My queen Georgia being hard yet soft ong I’m so here for this.
Bby Aleyx :( im soft here

WHAT THE HECK BERLINS WHAT THE HE K
RIP GENERAL CAINE and possibly Cody? MY BOYYY
I love Jason ok NOT BROTHERS BEING SEPERATE.
The boys being strong kings I’m so proud of them! Strong political leadership energy. Little Ethan out here w his ptsd damn I kinda miss him
Nick and Elvira!
Omg Fallon as the fashion designer? I love it that’s such a. Good idea and her reaction was so cute bby girl
Him going over to check on w the girls is peak selection I love it
Georgias second conversation? The cat and mouse games vibes? The Betty from white Xmas vibes? Showing slivers of the emotion and vulnerability? I’m dying to know what happened to Cody IS HE DEAD?
The Vera part WAS SO GOOD AHH!
4/7 c46 Delov
AHHH the final 5! This is getting serious but is it really?
This was a GORGEOUS transition as usual
Here for Wesley’s overthinking and brain transition chapters as he has to figure things out
ETHAN AND NICOLE SUPPORT FIGURES I LOVE THEM
Wesley’s just out here doing his best but he has to listen to the broke pieces story again (but I love it)
Observatory hours
ALEX I LOVE HER
That scene was so good I love how she left! Rather than being eliminated she left on her own and I love that. Sweet girl w good motives im touched and she cares about Wesley it’s sweet
I proud of her and of Wesley for helping out his girls even if he doesn’t think he is, I loved that part.
The goodbye party I’m soft
The press conference has major love actually vibes idk why it just did
The possibility of just ending the selection? Just like that? LOOKS HOPEFUL
4/4 c46 NamelessFearless
My baby is gone but I’m so proud UGH

ANYWHOMST great chapter super hype to see how it pans out toodles!
2/2 c45 Virtue01
This was an emotionally charged chapter. Wesley did a nice thing for Fallon by eliminated her and making he the official stylist of the palace. I like the way he and Lissa have these brief connection, I do hope that they can get back together. Brilliant writing as usual thanks for the update and stay safe.
2/2 c45 mnbvcxz-xx
So many feelings in this chapter... everything happens so fast, from Fallon being eliminated but actually staying and through Vera’s heartbreak. I’d like to believe that everything’s gonna be okay, but know probably not. Great chapter as always
1/12 c44 Delovlies
Part 2:
NICK AND WESLEY As buds! Iconic and hilarious and sweet. The sunglasses AHahahah we love nick. And Georgia laughing at him CUTE!
Flawless pivot off that to his mom being her usual self but Wesley’s GROWTH is so evident. Love the paragraph about the kids having to pick it up bc their parents failed.
The switching to the Lissa plot but SEAMLESSLY I totally thought he was gonna run into her again but like this too. They haven’t spoken in forever so LOVED hearing from her. Loved how he noticed all the details about her how she changed and their awkward conservation but you can hear everything they say between the lines. Then the reminder of how Lissa has grown and changed since ST Stan her too!
When she said time takes care of everything I freaked knowing whats gonna happen AHHHH it was perfect and felt perfect there and worked well for them.
I could SEE her wiping the tears away AHHH. The vibes.
The BOYS bc those are Wesley’s only friends (his brothers friends that his girlfriends cheated on).
The boys actually speaking to one another I love. Heart to heart convo while doing shots.
GRACIe I missed her now she’s being a mom watching out for them. Loved her view of it and how she told Wesley. Bc all that’s true and he didn’t realize it and I loved how it made him feel so bad and how he compared Eleanor and Lissa.
The rest of it was terrifying to read and SO INTENSE ANd put Fear tears in my eyes. Usually when I read it doesn’t translate intensity for me BUT THIS DID. It moved so well from the rest and transitioned so well. It was terrifying to read. Like we thought the war was over but NOPE. Poor scared Wesley. I like how you always check in w everyone and we saw Damian Colin and Adele and the other royal family were safe. It felt so long reading it but you did a lot in a short time with that ending GREAT.
The berlins? We also thought they were done (nope too easy) or WHAT? And is that where Cody was or is he under the palace IM NOT SURE KINDA SCARED OF THAT
We haven’t had the “what should happene next” convo yet so I know it might be a while but IM HERE FOR IT WHENEVER
1/12 c44 Delovlies
Each time is my new fave chapter and OBVIOUSLY this one is my new fave. The complexity going on here with all the different plots but adding to each other and Building and working in tandem was so masterful this is was equal parts delightful, suspenseful, emotional and beautiful to read.
The Wesley/Georgia relationship AHHH neither friends nor dating, some gray area that’s so intriguing. Her being softer and more vulnerable and open is 10/10 bc she is comfy w Wesley now. But her being sad and defeated even when she got what she wants UGH complex sis! Also loved the detail about her being the same height bc he always notices.
Yay for Jason I kinda love him. And we love a good reception/event here at heart. This one seemed like a vibe.
Yes the bros share a singular brain cell the wives hold the rest.
12/30/2020 c44 Nameless
Hi!
Happiest of Holidays.

Awesome chapter as always, I love my girl Aylex (that'll never change)

Hope you have a better year in 2021

~N
12/29/2020 c44 Guest
Very good chapter with a lot of interaction and drama. But you have to know that my favourite part was the meeting, between Lissa and Wes and although Gracie try to put him straight. I believe that he has his selection and Lissa is going on a date their love for each other is still there especially as is first thought was her during the attack. I Don't know if they will get back together in the end I hope that they do either way you are an excellent writer. Happy New Year and stage safe.
12/3/2020 c43 delovlies
I can't review until you start the next chapter and we have the "what should happen in heart next" conversation so finally I can tell you how GOOD this chapter is!
The LIGHTNESS and PLOT SHIFTS and plot advancement but also the soft lightness of this chapter was so beautiful.
ALL I HAVE TO SAY ABOUT THE KICKBALL IS THAT I CAN HEAR IT.
no i have a lot to say!
Alex and Fallon bless for being good friends Wesley needs them our pbj (CUTE) eating son I loved that casualness of them helping.
The throwback to ST and revisiting the memorial and Wesley thinking of his dad END ME that was some feelings I still am not ready for but I loved it.
YES The royal kids and ANdrew being a dad my heart! I always love the little moments of the royals being normal.
the kickball was precious and priceless and I liked seeing the girls less formally and interact with each other and Wesley and Aidan and people do this for fun? it was so loft and light and simple but it was still advancing the plot while being fluffy so chefs kiss.

UM I adored the stuff with Vera and how it looked on the outside to the other girls and her reaction to them helping Wesley. obviously someone would eventually find Vera with him and jump to the wrong conclusion but it also feels like Vera and Wesley is crashing slowly. Liked their flirting and arguing and how he is shutting her out of the whole Fallon thing and not telling her anything. (ALL THE DIFF RELATIONSHIPS WITH THE GIRLS BEING SO DIFFERENT IS SO GOOD!)
Baby boy go to therapy you need it go be strong!
I liked checking in with him, throughout we have been seeing him get better and drink less and stuff but it was nice to have a moment of him actually realizing he's doing better.
ALSO having him think back about Lissa and the broken pieces story and shes still there in the back of his mind and just subtly advancing the plot and the characters through regular scenes so well.
Oh hello IRis i forgot about her but THAT CONVERSATION WAS EVERYTHING! The image of these selected girls being silly teenagers during Ethans is cute! But her bringing up LISSA UGH It was so good and how Wesley reacted! I HAVE WESSA HOPE again and it was so subtle but so light and the timing was so good and I can't really express how much I loved that scene but just know that I loved it!
Also reminder that I love your Wesley voice and I love him and he's a special idiot we know that Lissa
11/6/2020 c43 mnbvcxz-xx
I loved the intervention and their friendship so much! Despite the whole selection, but they all really care about each other. The game seemed so much fun! I feel like it’s exactly what everyone need after all these stress that they’re going through.

It’s so sweet and a little sad to see Wesley’s glimmer of hope in Lissa. But I’m curious to see how he’ll act now that he knows there’s a slight hope. Thank you for the update!
11/6/2020 c43 Nameless
Oh my goodness, so much Alyex content (my baby) and FINALLY some more Lissa moments (even if just a faint memory) I love it so much! Can’t wait for more updates and hope you’re doing well in this crazy crazy time.
11/5/2020 c43 Virtue01
Great chapter I like the scene with Alyex and Fallon. The interaction with selection was good Aris and Wesley date had some eye-openers but, my favourite was the flicker of hope he had about Lissa. Thanks for the update and stay safe.
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