8/23/2018 c1 121Jelsemium
I like these vignettes, I think you really have the characters down. Agatha's proposal actually made me laugh out loud because, according to my mother, those were the EXACT words my father used when he proposed.
I like these vignettes, I think you really have the characters down. Agatha's proposal actually made me laugh out loud because, according to my mother, those were the EXACT words my father used when he proposed.
3/20/2018 c3 3Greatazuredragon
Once again excellent characterization.
You really manage to portray things through the character's eyes.
Great work, keep it up.
Once again excellent characterization.
You really manage to portray things through the character's eyes.
Great work, keep it up.
2/11/2018 c2 Greatazuredragon
Very good work, you really know how to capture the characters point of view.
I'm looking forward to Tarvek's chapter, well done.
Very good work, you really know how to capture the characters point of view.
I'm looking forward to Tarvek's chapter, well done.