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7/9/2020 c7 Guest
I wanna see chapter 8
7/6/2020 c7 CollectorNetwork
Ah, I can't emphasize how ecstatic I was to see a notification in my inbox that you updated! This was just amazing and so well-articulated! You have such a divine way with words, especially with your characterization. That, is one of the best parts and is one of your greatest strengths here. I can thoroughly feel and visualize each distinct character and the voice that they've portrayed.

Especially with Derby (I'm a biased, he's a personal favorite), truly exceptional with his dialogue and actions. I loved the choice of diction and vocabulary that helped elevate and emphasize his demeanor. Whether that was intentional or subconscious, it was absolutely superb in my opinion. As for the Greasers, Hal is continuing to throw me in for a loop. I never thought that kid would have the audacity to try to overthrow the school and town for his own personal game. Sometimes, when I go back to re-play Bully, I run into him in New Coventry a lot. I often follow him and question to myself, "This is the same kid that is trying to be next ruthless dictator."

Sorry, I'm just rambling at this point. I'll try to be more on topic and objective here. I just really enjoy reading through your story and couldn't stop talking to my family about it. We all grew up playing the game and seeing you have this different take on it, brings back a wave of nostalgia.

The first couple of times that I commented, I unfortunately didn't have an account. However, I made one recently because I was so intrigued and enamored by your story. I am beyond happy and excited that you have come back. However, I do want to emphasize that I hope you don't feel pressured or forced to update frequently. Please take as long as you need. Writers block and being burnt out are one of the worst feelings in my opinion.

Nonetheless, I am grateful to have read your newest chapter. Thank you for writing such an amazing story and we will all be eagerly waiting for your next chapter. Before I forget, please make sure to drink water and wash your hands! Gotta stay hydrated, especially since it's summer. Don't forget to wear a mask and stay safe! Keep up the amazing work! :)
7/6/2020 c7 3Mr.Green37
Kinda ironic that Derby says that to Jimmy since he's, well Derby.
5/19/2020 c6 Anon
WOW, I JUST FINISHED ALL THE CHAPTERS AND I NEED TO KNOW MORE. Honestly, the vivid details and how you're able to build tension and suspense is absolutely breathtaking. I love how you focus on building the action and focusing on the relations between characters. Extremely well done and I'm adding this to my all time favorite Bully fics. You are a fantastic writer and the way you're able to articulate these amazing plot points is phenomenal. It's been a long time since a story has had me sitting at the edge of my seat, waiting and hoping to know what happens next.

I love the interactions with Derby and Johnny, it amplifies the anger and animosity between the two. At the same time, you've added this depth and layering to their overall characters. I feel like we (The audience) can clearly see how objective you are with building your plot and characterization. Along with cameos with the Jocks and Nerds, it brings so much realism to the overall story.

However, my personal favorite part of this story was the event with Lola. She may not be my favorite but the way you portrayed her, she was truly human. Yeah, she's sexually promiscuous and manipulative as her main traits. But you've given her sense of real emotions - loneliness, craving for real affection, lack of love, and empathy. Even though it was a small scene, I love how you've created such a beautiful characterization with it.

Again, I thank you for writing and sharing your story. I love reading about revolutions and people destroying each other for power. This, by far, was one of the best Bully stories that I have read. It's also the first that doesn't focus heavily on romance but the actions and consequences of the characters. That's what makes this story, so beautiful and so unique. The way that your mind and imagination has created such a masterpiece is breath-taking.

Sorry for this long rant but you fully deserve it. I am so happy to have found this story and I wish you the best of writing. You are amazing and so talented at what you do. Thank you so much for writing this story. I have loved every minute spent on reading it.

- Anon :)
5/19/2020 c1 Anon
First chapter in and wow. I wasn't expecting it to jump straight into the action and allow me to be intrigued by the events. Especially with Hal, where on earth did he get that hammer? Why is he angry? All these questions were swirling in my head while I was reading through your chapter. I was immediately pulled in and wanting to know more about the events unfolding. Great job with your chapter! Best of luck to you and your writing!

- Anon

P.S

Stay safe in quarantine. Thank you for writing and sharing your story. :)
8/1/2019 c6 Liliana487
I love where this story is going! You write your scenes so vividly; it’s as if I’m actually watching this unfold in the game! The tension is also building...I wonder what’s going to happen next? Thank you for writing such a great fic!
8/1/2019 c6 Liliana487
I’d just like to say that I love where this story is going! Your writing is so vivid; it feels as if I’m actually there! The tension is also building...what’s going to happen next? What new attack is being planned on Bullworth? It’s all so riveting—thanks for such a good story!
7/30/2019 c6 50MASTERMIND360
The battlewagon?! The one which is entirely removed from the game due to PS2 limitations?! Awesome!
7/29/2019 c6 3Mr.Green37
Ah, the Johnny and Mandy shipping. Sadly it seems like a way for Johnny to fill the Lola sized hole in his heart.

Seriously, Johnny has really gotten screwed over in this story. Someone help the poor guy.
7/21/2019 c4 Mr.Green37
Looks like they are ready for a beat down.

I was honestly expecting Derby to be a part of the plot just to take down Johnny Boy.
7/19/2019 c3 Mr.Green37
And the plot thickens.

So what role will Lola play in this? Is this another grab for attention for her? If so, I bet this will blow up in her face when Hal throws her out or something.
7/10/2019 c2 Mr.Green37
I kinda feel bad for Johnny here. I mean his own friends are turning against him and he is blind to it.
6/19/2019 c1 An idiot
The fuck is this?a fanfic with a lot of potential,and you end the entire fanfic in one short chapter.

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