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8/25 c17 2Rose1414
I'm glad you are feeling better now and I am looking forward to seeing the improved version of an already good story.
8/23 c17 Ghouly-Girl
Longing to breath life into your passion and not having the breath to spare. I think that can resonate with a lot of us who struggle with depression. I’m happy to hear you are okay, I will admit I do get a little worried about my favourite authors when they go dark. And while I am happy to know we will get to know what will happen (I certainly I look forward to any changes you will make and for what you have planned for the character’s future) it is a much larger relief to know you are in a good place mentally. Keep up the good work you’re doing for yourself, and stay safe.
8/23 c17 EchoMoment
I'm glad you're doing better I've been though the same thing lately. And take as much time as you need I'd wait forever for another chapter I love this story so much. One question though the editing of your chapters are they going to be changed hugely where you'll need to re-read or just small tweaks?
8/23 c16 mariafivi1
Okay finally logged in (havent in such a long time gosh) so I could follow! I subscribed on ao3 too (I hope I found the right one) because I am sure I will see the ao3 emails and I will check your tumblr as well. Thank you for reaching out after such a long time 3
Its easy to fall in love with the show again, I remember watching the show when it first came out and even after years watching it again it remains as mysterious and exciting as the first time. Your Bella and your writing just enriches the story.
8/23 c17 2Victoria1902
You have no idea how happy I am to hear that you shall be updating this story. As for not updating, do not worry about it. It is completely understandable that life gets in the way. I am glad to hear that you seem to be in a better head space than before. Take the time you need to update.
8/23 c15 Guest
The thing with your writing is, the first part with Hannibal and Bella fighting and the last part of the chapter with Will and her feel like a novel apart. I have noticed this with other chapters too. Honestly, I am a bit obsessed with your story at this point. Bella's dynamic with both of them is very different but somehow there is middle ground. Hannibal brings out a different part of her and Will is her safe place.
Character development is excellent. I have got to say, I love how Hannibal practically hates Abigail. It's very on brand for him.
8/23 c11 Guest
Hello again! (I am at the beach reading this time, I refuse to put this down until I have swallowed the existing chapters up)
As always, excellent writing. I dont know why you were so worried in the notes. I loved it
8/22 c17 the.apple.seed
I'll gladly wait out all of your updates! This story is just so unique and your writing is incredible. Excellent job in the characterization of Bella, Will, Hannibal, Jack and more. Your dialogue and descriptions of each character's thoughts are just lovely. Great to see you back, and am so stoked for what's to come with this story!
8/22 c10 Guest
Oh, so we agree! I do can definitely see a three way relationship with them. I can also see platonic romance. Honestly, I think Hannibal is one of the most open minded people out there. There is nothing conventional about these three, so how can their relationship be? They are 3 exceptional people that found each other
8/22 c9 Guest
I love the relationship between the three. I can see the three of them have a relationship (friendship, romantic, romantic but not sexual, literally the possibilities are endless with Hannibal and both of them).

And hello Alejandra!
8/22 c8 Guest
(continuing on with my reviews)
Oh okay you weren't a minor then *phew* just barely still.
I just love the way the characters coexist. The way they interact with each other. They are colorful, in my opinion all true to their cannon selves and three dimensional. Their thoughts and dialogue just make sense. I dont think you know how hard it is for an author to achieve that. I found a gem here I tell you! In my personal opinion this is by far the best Hannibal with OC insert story out there (and trust me I am positive I have read 90% of them) and it has jumped up to one of my all time favorites quick. Again, it may seem like I am exaggerating, but I have a file of about 200 Hannibal stories on my laptop that I have liked(on ao3 you can download them) so I have a pretty good picture of what's out there already.
8/22 c17 Guest
Girl I cant believe this! I was in the middle of reading the story and I read this. I cannot properly describe my joy. I wish you all the hardships you went through just became experience that will in time become faint memories, with new, happier ones staying vivid in your mind. And congrats on your degree!
No matter how long it takes, you at the very least have me as a reader (but honestly, on ao3 the Hannibal fandom is still surprisingly active, I am sure this will be popular very soon)! Even if it takes ages, I am nothing if not patient. When the quality is so good, I don't worry about anything else. I was so prepared to just leave this story unfinished but I still wanted to read every single chapter carefully.
Thank you for this! I am looking forward to reading this once more and eventually reading the continuation too!
8/22 c7 Maria Foivi
You are telling me that you wrote this when you were a minor? (Just read the bio) Count me baffled. I don't dare miss a sentence of this
8/22 c17 1I'm a leaf in the wind
No need to apologize! Life often gets in the way. Much love to you
8/22 c4 Guest
I am so incredibly lucky to have stumbled upon this. Your Hannibal is A
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