8/31/2018 c11 12Altea the orca
Thank you so much for putting in how Keith may have known she was a girl those two need to have more time together
Thank you so much for putting in how Keith may have known she was a girl those two need to have more time together
8/21/2018 c12 17Rapunzella
"I have so many questions I want to ask"––Keith's dad voices the thoughts of every fan after meeting Krolia! I like how you kept this vague, not revealing more than we know from the show at this point. This seems perfectly in keeping with what we've seen of Keith's dad so far: practical, more a man of action than of words, careful whom he trusts, but not hesitant to give aid when it's needed. Keith takes after him in many ways. Depending on what the show reveals in season 7, and what you feel like writing, I'd love to see this develop into it's own short story cycle just about Keith's parents, or about how Keith relates to them specifically.
"I have so many questions I want to ask"––Keith's dad voices the thoughts of every fan after meeting Krolia! I like how you kept this vague, not revealing more than we know from the show at this point. This seems perfectly in keeping with what we've seen of Keith's dad so far: practical, more a man of action than of words, careful whom he trusts, but not hesitant to give aid when it's needed. Keith takes after him in many ways. Depending on what the show reveals in season 7, and what you feel like writing, I'd love to see this develop into it's own short story cycle just about Keith's parents, or about how Keith relates to them specifically.
6/2/2018 c10 10Songbird Rebel
I love how Keith pieced it together and kept it to himself until "Taking Flight" when Pidge comes clean...
I love how Keith pieced it together and kept it to himself until "Taking Flight" when Pidge comes clean...
12/1/2017 c7 10Songbird Rebel
This is really good... I always wonder how Keith got his hands on that hoverbike
This is really good... I always wonder how Keith got his hands on that hoverbike