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for The Story of SuCon (Tabbi's introduction)

5/17/2017 c1 47Wildebunny the Eternal
Well, since you want critique -

Separate chapters into actual chapters.

New speaker requires a new paragraph.

Certain parts of the story really looks like a wall of text.

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