1/1 c25 awes0mesaucer
Ah, so the maid that appeared towards the beginning will appear again? The plot thickens :D
It's sweet how they are slowly gravitating towards each other more and more. Though I admit, I really can't wait until the story reaches it's climax. I look forward to the next chapter.
Ah, so the maid that appeared towards the beginning will appear again? The plot thickens :D
It's sweet how they are slowly gravitating towards each other more and more. Though I admit, I really can't wait until the story reaches it's climax. I look forward to the next chapter.
12/31/2020 c25 Fluffymarshmallows
I love that Jane knows how to play the harp! I've been playing it since I was in middle school, and it is truly a beautiful instrument. I like to think it suits her well, for while delicate in appearance, it requires a lot of hand and finger strength (you get a lot of callouses too), and you have to have really good coordination as well. It seems perfect for her. Easy to underestimate at first glance, but strong and talented when you get to know her.
I love that Jane knows how to play the harp! I've been playing it since I was in middle school, and it is truly a beautiful instrument. I like to think it suits her well, for while delicate in appearance, it requires a lot of hand and finger strength (you get a lot of callouses too), and you have to have really good coordination as well. It seems perfect for her. Easy to underestimate at first glance, but strong and talented when you get to know her.
12/27/2020 c24 RiverKitsune226
I loved this show as a kid and despite everyone shipping Gunther/Jane or Jester/Jester, I loved Smithy/Jane and I thought the characters were perfect. (well despite a darkish Jester) and I thoroughly enjoyed reading this so far and can't wait for the next chapter.
I loved this show as a kid and despite everyone shipping Gunther/Jane or Jester/Jester, I loved Smithy/Jane and I thought the characters were perfect. (well despite a darkish Jester) and I thoroughly enjoyed reading this so far and can't wait for the next chapter.
12/23/2020 c24 Fluffymarshmallows
Nooo, Jester! But at least Jane is starting to come around to Smithy. And I'm glad to see Smithy standing up for himself, I feel like he might not have been so bold before all this.
Nooo, Jester! But at least Jane is starting to come around to Smithy. And I'm glad to see Smithy standing up for himself, I feel like he might not have been so bold before all this.
12/21/2020 c23 awes0mesaucer
I'm really glad you decided to prolong it, the follow-up in this chapter was awesome and the moment they had while cleaning up was a delight. The dynamic Smithy and Jane share in this story is lovely, just calmness and understanding, I adore it. Also thank you, I'm honored that my review inspired you to write a bit more about the ball. 3
I'm really glad you decided to prolong it, the follow-up in this chapter was awesome and the moment they had while cleaning up was a delight. The dynamic Smithy and Jane share in this story is lovely, just calmness and understanding, I adore it. Also thank you, I'm honored that my review inspired you to write a bit more about the ball. 3
12/15/2020 c23 Fluffymarshmallows
Ahhhhh, they are so cute! And you write them so eloquently. I absolutely love the way you get into each character's head, it makes the story so realistic to me. It is easy to put myself in each of your scenes, to see Jane's fiery hair move as she dances or Smithy's questioning gaze (and that wink too). You never fail to impress, dear author.
Ahhhhh, they are so cute! And you write them so eloquently. I absolutely love the way you get into each character's head, it makes the story so realistic to me. It is easy to put myself in each of your scenes, to see Jane's fiery hair move as she dances or Smithy's questioning gaze (and that wink too). You never fail to impress, dear author.
12/13/2020 c22 awes0mesaucer
Ah, I predict drama on the menu very very soon. :D
Nice to see both of their points of view through the day before the ball. I wish the ball itself was a bit longer though. Or will it continue in the next chapter? Given the build up towards it I sort of expected a little longer narration of it. But other than that this was an awesome chapter!
Ah, I predict drama on the menu very very soon. :D
Nice to see both of their points of view through the day before the ball. I wish the ball itself was a bit longer though. Or will it continue in the next chapter? Given the build up towards it I sort of expected a little longer narration of it. But other than that this was an awesome chapter!
12/10/2020 c22 Fluffymarshmallows
Awwww, they are just too cute! And I love the idea of Dragon getting too impatient with all the dancing and then flaming up the pumpkin to make a scene instead lol.
Awwww, they are just too cute! And I love the idea of Dragon getting too impatient with all the dancing and then flaming up the pumpkin to make a scene instead lol.
12/8/2020 c21 Fluffymarshmallows
Awww, poor Gunther. I feel so bad for him. Boys and not knowing how to express their feelings smh.
Awww, poor Gunther. I feel so bad for him. Boys and not knowing how to express their feelings smh.
12/3/2020 c20 awes0mesaucer
I think the Pepper/Rake moments are very sweet and add a nice touch to the story! The ball sounds exciting, but somehow I don't think that it will be where the romantic climax of the story happens. Just a hunch I got :D
I think the Pepper/Rake moments are very sweet and add a nice touch to the story! The ball sounds exciting, but somehow I don't think that it will be where the romantic climax of the story happens. Just a hunch I got :D
12/2/2020 c20 Fluffymarshmallows
Oooh, it will be awesome to hear from Dragon! I've been missing him. And it's just like Pepper to play matchmaker. I bet it's a blast to write her.
Oooh, it will be awesome to hear from Dragon! I've been missing him. And it's just like Pepper to play matchmaker. I bet it's a blast to write her.
11/25/2020 c19 Fluffymarshmallows
You have such a wonderful way with words! It's nice to hear from Pepper and Rake, by the way. They are such sweet characters. They were definitely my favorites growing up.
You have such a wonderful way with words! It's nice to hear from Pepper and Rake, by the way. They are such sweet characters. They were definitely my favorites growing up.
11/22/2020 c18 awes0mesaucer
Oh, I do hope this will have a happy ending, I adore the story a lot.
I'm not very good at giving constructive reviews, so I hope you won't mind if I just say that I think your writing is very good in this. 3
Oh, I do hope this will have a happy ending, I adore the story a lot.
I'm not very good at giving constructive reviews, so I hope you won't mind if I just say that I think your writing is very good in this. 3
11/20/2020 c18 Fluffymarshmallows
I'm so glad you have been enjoying my reviews! I loved this show growing up, and I was beyond shocked to find people wrote fanfiction for it, let alone really high-quality ones. But here I am, and you, dear author, are definitely taking the cake in the Jane/Smithy department. As Jane would say, "It's a champion story." The way you write Smithy is so delicate and heartwarming I don't know what to do with myself half the time, to be honest. Anyway, ramble over, and, as always, I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
I'm so glad you have been enjoying my reviews! I loved this show growing up, and I was beyond shocked to find people wrote fanfiction for it, let alone really high-quality ones. But here I am, and you, dear author, are definitely taking the cake in the Jane/Smithy department. As Jane would say, "It's a champion story." The way you write Smithy is so delicate and heartwarming I don't know what to do with myself half the time, to be honest. Anyway, ramble over, and, as always, I'm looking forward to the next chapter!