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4/26/2020 c17 19Consort
Well, it's a good thing Illustain was quick on the draw with his diplomacy, and the officer saw reason. That really felt like it was close to turning incredibly messy... Either way, we definitely owe him for the save.

Who's side is Gamov on? It can't be Vigoor, there's a lot of betrayals directed that way, but it certainly isn't anyone else if he's trying to raze the city, unless he's maybe in the pocket of an outside power who would benefit from toppling the power of the Vigoor Empire, like a large corporation or powerful government. He's got to have someone significant backing him up, or he's got absolutely no chance of walking out of this one intact.

Glad to see the machine gun is effective against their rank-and-file. We'd be in some trouble if it wasn't!
4/23/2020 c5 2APAZAROZO
Everything is good regarding your writing. I try not to laugh at this klutz Ryu, and cool Kureha, go just see it as an alternate dimension Ninja Gaiden. Its funny! But your writing is worth it.
4/18/2020 c16 5LightJakRises
I liked how you handled the game. I wouldn't mind Ryu/Rachel to be the main pairing.

Nice work.
12/10/2019 c11 6inphernalmenace
Rachel is finally being independent now. It's a shame this will likely be the split between her and Alma.
12/8/2019 c16 9Captain-Brazil
Going from the beggining, I always enjoy reading about original stories gettinga different path to see what could happen. Thos "What if"s are always interesting to see, and with this story was no different. Of course, there some grammar problems but nothing that make difficult to the story, and I really liking the way this is going.
With that said, I will keep reading this to see to where the story will lead our heroes.
12/8/2019 c16 19Consort
Hm. Ryu is learning pretty fast, and it's good to see him start to preserve life on all fronts. Imagine burning through another one of those precious elixirs because you fell off a roof. Although not killing people without necessity will probably have a better long term effect on his mental health, to say nothing of the Dragon Sword.

As for Rachel... well, she at least didn't pick any fight with Ryu while fiends were running loose. Although they'll have a lot to talk about once the area is secured.
11/30/2019 c10 6inphernalmenace
That is a pretty interesting take on the idea of good and evil.
11/30/2019 c9 inphernalmenace
Murai is kind of a dick, but Joe totally deserved it. Terrible father and clan leader.
11/30/2019 c8 inphernalmenace
Illustain is really brave, or just really fanatically devoted to his faith. Letting the two go just because he wanted them to only become fiends through the right path really almost got him killed by Doku.
11/30/2019 c7 inphernalmenace
Everyone is plotting, and they all expect Ryu to be a nonfactor that dies quickly to be a distraction for everyone else. But we all know he is the main character and will surprise them all.
11/29/2019 c4 inphernalmenace
Those deaths hit me like a rock. And poor Kureha... I hope she doesn't die. But that might be too much to ask for.
11/29/2019 c3 inphernalmenace
Oh no, everyone is dying. Though, I notice that Rachel and Alma didn't visibly take part in the slaughter. So it looks like our anger will have to be focused on Doku instead.
11/29/2019 c2 inphernalmenace
Hmmm, who do I want to succeed, Ryu or Rachel and Alma. One tries to protect the blade, the other tries to steal it.
11/28/2019 c1 inphernalmenace
Ryu shows the most important quality for a hero, being determined. It is natural for him to have a future where he will go far, since he won't give up. I look forward to seeing his future exploits.
10/31/2019 c15 19Consort
I love Ryu's combat tactics, the way he handles a fight with factors outside his raw strength and skills actually make him quite personable- when faced with overwhelmingly difficult situations, he uses his mind to gain an upper hand, even if the options he has to take are brutal and often leave him reviled. Still, I hope he can find a few more of those Elixirs of Life, because it feels like he's burning through them for how incredibly valuable they are.

Also, I can confirm that the OG Ninja Gaiden definitely makes you feel more like this Ryu than some lightspeed ninja. Not sure about any remakes, though...
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