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4/18 c11 1vashley202
You can't just leave him a vegetablenoooooo I'm super invested in a dead storyI excitedly thought he would go with them on a mission and seeing the feather of his melted down parts would do something, or he would somehow fall out of the dolphin and the sensation of the wind would suddenly snap him back!
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8/29/2018 c11 SomeoneForeign
Hope you didn't drop this fic. :-( it is good.
6/3/2018 c11 SF
Another good chapter. As always. I am eagerly anticipating the next one.
5/8/2018 c11 4silverwolf310
Yay! New chapter and this is getting good.
3/29/2018 c10 12Abztract Isight
I wish you had continued on with this story and like the others hope you will one day post more chapters.
3/29/2018 c3 Abztract Isight
I like the concept of this story. Also it's hard to keep me interested and reading more chapters, but your writing is good and I keep wanting more.
3/29/2018 c1 Abztract Isight
Thank you for writing in third person. This story is well thought out. The grammar and structure is excellent and helps with the flow of the story. I enjoyed reading this chapter.
3/22/2018 c10 anon
Please finish this fic!
3/17/2018 c9 4silverwolf310
I've reread this like a couple of times already. It wouldn't surprise me if Jet could see what Joe did when using the acceleration. How many times has Jet saved the others from falling to their deaths or being killed, especially Albert. That could explain why he gets mad or scared when someone is about to get hurt, he saw it coming. I really like the way Albert is written in here and i think they are so cute even if Jet is still out of it. I really hope those two get together in the fic, but your story! Please update soon it's really good.
3/12/2018 c10 silverwolf310
Please update! We need to know what happens!
3/9/2018 c10 SF
(Sad beep)

Why do I have the feeling that that Dr. Grant guy has something to do with all these problems? Did he sabotage Jet's new body somehow? I find him very suspicious. Hmmm, oh well, I'll just have to wait for the next chapter to see what will happen.
3/7/2018 c10 Olgab70
This chapter was very intense.
The team is not yet ready to accept that maybe Jet will not return as before, and they do their best to help him, even if at times they forget him, they do not give peace and feel guilty, causing occasional fractures in the peace of their daily life. Francoise seems to be the only one to have thought of this eventuality.
But then, if Jet's cybernetics works, then what's missing? I always hope for a happy ending, they will find a way to trigger the spring that will bring back Jet.
See you soon!
Olga.
3/2/2018 c9 SF
I was really glad to see that you had updated. :-D Great chapter as always. Glad to see that this one got sort of a happy ending.
3/2/2018 c9 Olgab70
Thanks thanks thanks!
I was very happy to be able to read a chapter of this fic again.
Like the previous ones, very well articulated and clear; I really like how all the comrades are prodigal, in different fields, trying to bring Jet back to the old man. Hope and sometimes the disappointment of failure are palpable.
The road will be long and difficult, Jet has remained without stimulation for two years, but his companions have destroyed the Black Ghosts, they will bring him back !
I would like to read something about the love affair between Joe and Francoise, although I know that she is not one of the protagonists of this story; I'll try the same to ask for it !
I hope I can read another beautiful chapter soon.
See you soon Olga.
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