12/17/2017 c7 CoCo
Pleas update soon!
Pleas update soon!
11/25/2017 c6 7VerdiTheTRex
Wow! Your grammar is really good! I should've read this sooner. I agree with TEAM SOPHIE and Waves-of-Writing–you really are Shannon Messenger, aren't you?
And I can imagine Tam sleeping with a stuffed elephant. He'll finally be part of the "Cool Kids Sleeping With Stuffed Animals" party!
This story has a lot of potential, and already is great. I love it! I'm really tired, and this is, like, the best relief anyone can get!
-Verdi
Wow! Your grammar is really good! I should've read this sooner. I agree with TEAM SOPHIE and Waves-of-Writing–you really are Shannon Messenger, aren't you?
And I can imagine Tam sleeping with a stuffed elephant. He'll finally be part of the "Cool Kids Sleeping With Stuffed Animals" party!
This story has a lot of potential, and already is great. I love it! I'm really tired, and this is, like, the best relief anyone can get!
-Verdi
11/12/2017 c5 CoCo
Aww I don't have nightfall yet I'm so desperate I have started reading all the spoilers I can find
Aww I don't have nightfall yet I'm so desperate I have started reading all the spoilers I can find
11/12/2017 c4 CoCo
Sofitz or tophie I don't know their is only lime one other tophie fan fiction and they are sooo cute!
Sofitz or tophie I don't know their is only lime one other tophie fan fiction and they are sooo cute!
10/30/2017 c3 7TEAM SOPHIE
Wow, this is really good for a first story! My first story was absolutely terrible, lol. You've got a very nice voice and impressive grammar! Keep up the good work and consider me a regular reader (at least, when I'm not busy with school *cries*) This story has a lot of potential and I'm excited to see how it'll turn out in the end! Good job and welcome to FF! :)
~Maddie~
And yes, I agree with Waves-Of-Writing 100%. Your writing is spot-on and definitely not in the least bit OOC. You've portrayed the KOTLC characters perfectly— not a lot of people can do that, especially on their first story! Excited to see how you'll grow as an author here!
Wow, this is really good for a first story! My first story was absolutely terrible, lol. You've got a very nice voice and impressive grammar! Keep up the good work and consider me a regular reader (at least, when I'm not busy with school *cries*) This story has a lot of potential and I'm excited to see how it'll turn out in the end! Good job and welcome to FF! :)
~Maddie~
And yes, I agree with Waves-Of-Writing 100%. Your writing is spot-on and definitely not in the least bit OOC. You've portrayed the KOTLC characters perfectly— not a lot of people can do that, especially on their first story! Excited to see how you'll grow as an author here!
10/30/2017 c2 4Waves-Of-Writing
YOU KNOW TGE CHARACTERS SO WELL. OC unOC characters is not at all here. This is great!
YOU KNOW TGE CHARACTERS SO WELL. OC unOC characters is not at all here. This is great!