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2/20 c5 Guest
Wow, lovely written story with such a good idea! I'm looking forward to finding out about M's eye colour...
And it's amazing to write such a good story in a foreign language! Keep it up!
2/17 c5 11FanLass
What a wonderful story. You definitely have Connor and Methos down pat And I love the way you write them. Very interesting story I’ve often thought of the subject and what the Ancient I models have to teach. This was both well written and well done and thank you for writing it.
1/21/2019 c5 Elfinabottle
This was an awesome story! There are far too few fanfics about Connor, and since he and Methos are my favorite immortals, I really loved this. My favorite part was the explanation of the game, and how early belief in it hardened into dogma. I've always wondered why there wasn't more skepticism about that; it seems odd that every immortal is just willing to take the word of their teacher about the game.

I hope you continue to write. I would love to read more from you.
10/4/2018 c5 rosdon82
Dear author! Thanks! Very impressive story! I like your Methos, Connor and Nick!Your story seems to be very real and well done. I believe in it. I will wait for the continue!

P.S. Sorry for my English. It's my fourth language:)
1/14/2018 c5 Guest
I sure didn't see that ending coming! Great story.
Thanks for letting me know that English isn't your first or second language. I really admire your fluency in this scrambled language. Yes, there are grammatical discrepancies, but from what I learned long ago in my one year of Spanish ... English doesn't follow the same logic as do other languages. So, it's easy to overlook the grammar differences in your writing. (It's when a writer grows up speaking American English and proudly announces he/she doesn't see any reason to follow correct word choices, punctuation, etc. that I am annoyed and sometimes abandon the story.)
Thanks for sharing.
11/11/2017 c1 6HakSem
Thank you for the review, this seem to be the only way to respond unfortunately. I am aware and working in my grammar, i will check my have and has. Any other words that specifically jump out as wrong please tell. :-)
I agree that 'Adam Pierson's' eyes are brown, not Mao Zhu's however. This will be a large part of later story lines when i manage to shape them into something i dare publish.
11/3/2017 c5 Guest
The plot is good. It’s always interesting to read speculations on how Connor and Methos might have met before. Your grammar however makes the story a bit difficult to read. You’re using have when it should be has and not using the proper tense for many words. You’ve got a great idea but it could use a bit of editing. Methos’ eyes are brown by the way not green.

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