Just In
Community
Forum
More
for Dark Souls: Age of Tranquility

10/4/2020 c20 2geminidrake
Awesome, an update! And it doesn't disappoint either. Truly captures the feeling of a Dark Souls title, especially with that cliffhanger at the end of the chapter. What other mysteries lie in wait in this huge shrine? I cannot wait until the next chapter. Thank you for your hard work and keep being awesome and safe.
9/8/2020 c19 geminidrake
And here I am at the last chapter. Dang, it was getting really good. I don't know if you'll ever come back to this or not, but I hope you do. I'd like to know what happens next in the Lucid One's journey. Whatever you're doing now, I hope you're safe. Keep your creativity intact, good person.
11/17/2018 c16 Guest
Will the old warrior pop up? The souls of old were cast out with the demons.
11/15/2018 c16 9Arklaw
Nice. I could picture the action easily, and it's not too horrible a read.
Are there other words to refer to the Lucid One ? Such as "our fallen hero", "the brave warrior" ..?
Maybe you should allow him to speak out loud once in a while ? To curse fate or the enemy. To express his awe before the lands he visits.
While I can believe in the resilience of our conqueror of adversity, mayhap his survival against so many blows and spells can be seen as excessive for those seeking realism.
Also, you referred to the sorcerer as "the hunter" preparing a spell before the bolt hit him.
10/19/2018 c15 Guest
Strange things happen in that wood.
7/7/2018 c2 1Exodus758
This story is absolutely brilliant so far. It is written with enough sophistication to flow well and read like an actual book, but not with so much that I feel stupid and am left scratching my head at the meaning of every other word.

However, the best part so far is how you're absolutely nailing the atmosphere. This genuinely feels like a new Dark Souls installment - so much so that I'm pretty much considering it canon. Every creature, every location (the intro scene with the angel and the glass coffers was fantastic - again, it truly felt like the opening of a Dark Souls game), even Teryn's dialect towards the main character... I'm absolutely blown away so far. If someone handed me this and did not tell me it was a fanfiction, I would be convinced it's the draft for Dark Souls IV.

I cannot wait to read more of this, and I do hope you see it through to the end. If you don't, it will feel as if I've been given Dark Souls IV and I can only play part of the way through it. Thank you for this - I have a passion for this series, and thus far your story is giving me the same level of wonder and intrigue that every new Dark Souls installment did.
6/20/2018 c14 Guest
This story can be a bit tough to get into but man is it worth it!
6/13/2018 c13 Guest
"Sacrifice" "immortal" I see you too tread the path of idiosyncratic From Software descriptions.
6/9/2018 c11 Guest
A witch you say? Obviously this one one knew to fear the flame... Oh fuck, Aldritch actually did see the future!
5/17/2018 c10 3Fire Spirit Noir
When I first started this, my first thought was that this reads like Dark Souls plays. Now that I finished chapter 10 my opinion has not changed. I would say you're doing a darn good job, please keep going.
5/11/2018 c10 Guest
I don't think Nephew or the bottomless pit was mentioned before. A reread is always enjoyable. Its also interesting seeing the lack 8f fire and souls in this dimensions metaphysics. Though there is obviously mentions of holdovers. I wonder if there are any old metaphysical laws that carried over before the First Flame ducked all that up.
5/11/2018 c10 Guest
Oh Fuck! Titanite demon
3/25/2018 c6 Guest
I am really liking all the Souls refences and BB influence. There seems to be an influence from some of the more high profile Biblical stories, too. Your writing makes the fights and scenarios flow easily; the fighting doesn't take too long nor is it exhaustive in detail. There are too many writerss who make the mistake of adding too much detail. The gameplay mechanics are also translated well enough into the story to not necessarily know about said mechanics, except for that one mention of health in chapter 6.
3/25/2018 c5 Guest
New covanant discovered.
12/17/2017 c4 hydroboy87
The story has been amazing so far. The descriptions are quite vivid. As a reader, I am able to imagine the whole scenario, character and the world. Can't wait for the next chapter!
16 Page 1 2 Next »

Twitter . Help . Sign Up . Cookies . Privacy . Terms of Service