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10/13/2020 c6 Darkside0
I really didn't trusted Lee maby he is just helping Nina & Anna sweetheart why you're so stupid TT don't disappoint me TT, if Lee want doing something like that lo Anna it will be horrible I really don't like to see him lie to her anyway nice chapter :)
10/13/2020 c6 120Razer Athane
ooooooOOOOOO an update!

'How was it possible that no matter how far they drifted apart something would always anchor them back to each other?' - this was gorgeous dude, very on point

AW YISS THEY'RE GONNA HANG AGAIN ASLDKFJLSKDF

'But his reply suggested he was seeking approval and it threw her off.' - NICE

Nice work as always, good to see you writing again.
6/13/2020 c5 Razer Athane
Jesus, sorry I missed this. After your new Bruce fic I went back to see what else of yours I missed, and it was this update!

Real smooth descriptions throughout, you're still a great Anna writer. You can feel her need for revenge seeping through the screen.

Looking forward to the next update!
1/6/2019 c5 10LucyInTheSkyWithStories
Oh, Anna... I just want to give her a hug.

I think we've felt that way to some at least once. When you can't bring yourself to do anything, when getting out of bed is a monumental task. When you want to pretend like you have it together but you show the world how vulnerable you are instead.

Great job writing this. I hope Anna can make it through this because it hurts to see her like that.
12/27/2018 c5 40JunKing
Damn this was powerful. I found myself able to relate so well to Anna's suffering. You really wrote the hell out of this, the emotions just flowed so well. From her not wanting to wake up and face another day, to the struggle of keeping her attention on trivial everyday matters, to being unable to fire her weapon properly. It was amazing to see how well you captured her anxiety and sullen mood. Even worse, seeing Lee smiling and enjoying life while she sinks into her own despair, I hate that feeling. And then the angry jealousy that comes with wanting to take the significant other out, honestly there's so much raw emotion and power in this chapter. Eagerly awaiting the next part! Great job!
12/26/2018 c5 Guest
oh anna ...poor anna :( i dont want her to be so weak
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12/26/2018 c5 1Loreadana
Love all your Anna stories. Great job!
6/20/2018 c4 Guest
i hope that u update it soon
4/22/2018 c4 120Razer Athane
Haven't lost your touch, dude. Enjoying this so far, rich in feelings.
3/31/2018 c4 40JunKing
Damn. I totally felt Anna's pain here. Nobody wants to hear that they are second best, especially from someone who means everything to them. This seems very relatable as I feel we've all had our heart broken in some way or another throughout our lives. Now that Anna has her answer, I'm curious to see how she will handle the situation going forward. I like how you described her point of view. How Nina always seems to be ahead of her in life, taking everything away from her at a moment's notice. She was so close, or at least that's what she thought. Thankfully, we know Anna is a tough young woman. But it will take her time to realize that. Great job, I can't wait to see what will happen next!
3/26/2018 c4 10LucyInTheSkyWithStories
Ouch...my heart.

Those seven words literally made me take a short break before reading the rest.

After reading this chapter, I don't think I can ever look at Nina the same way again. She's got ulterior motives, I know it. I wouldn't feel terrible if Anna actually went through with the cyanide thing.

And Lee...I can't even, and that's so in character too... You selfish bastard, just let her go!

I love the way you write Anna, so, so vulnerable. Perfect.

Will be eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
3/26/2018 c4 Guest
Awww poor Anna..
2/17/2018 c3 57SeungSeiRan
Heellooo...

Yeah, I remember you hinting that you'd written something new and here I am, late as ever to the game

In any case, this brought back some good memories of the fics I enjoyed back when I was active here. As expected, your Anna is lovely, so complex and vulnerable that it's hard to reconcile this with her canon characterization. Which isn't bad at all, just a much-needed break from that.

Although, while I'm enjoying the tender Lee/Anna moments of this chapter, I can't help but imagine the gut wrench when this inevitably takes a turn for the worst, judging by the 'Angst' listed in your summary. Damn it, 3 chapters and already invested? Good job, dude.
1/15/2018 c3 10LucyInTheSkyWithStories
I love your portrayal of Bruce! The line about taking his gun apart made me laugh. The fun thing about characters like him, with zero personality, is that you can make them into whatever you want.

You're doing such an amazing job at making Anna human and relatable, there have to be tons of insecurities underneath her perfect exterior. And poor Lee getting arrested? I never thought about it but it's possible, I wonder what he was really up to...

Can't wait to see what you have in store for these two crazy kids.
12/16/2017 c3 40JunKing
That was very sweet of Anna to track Lee down. I could almost feel her anxiety when he finally walked through the door of the lounge. And also, LOVED the line about how some books shouldn't be opened, no matter how tempting the cover is. I also enjoyed her Irish moment. It made me laugh when she said she couldn't go around sounding like a leprechaun all the time. Well now that they've rekindled a bit of their feelings, I'm looking forward to see where this goes. Great job and looking forward to an update!
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