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3/21/2020 c29 19Darkness Takes Over
Another good update. Glad you cleared up Maggie's other encounter with Freddy. I have read or seen few comics pictures about the comic book, where she goes insane etc. Though it's very dark the way that turned out I believe.
2/17/2020 c28 Darkness Takes Over
Apologies for not reviewing last few chapters. Just been busy.

Another good chapter. Though there could be a few sentences that need fixed. But overall things are going well.

I was intrigued in knowing more about Maggie's encounter after Freddys Dead with her father.
9/18/2019 c21 Darkness Takes Over
There has been a good deal of improvement in the story. Though just a suggestion in the dream sequences use more of Freddys dream powers - how he can transform into other people, the environment ..etc Describe how he is effecting the dream more.

Other all the story is good. Looking to see how you protray Maggie around Freddy. I'm a big Maggie /Katherine fan.
9/10/2019 c20 Freddy K Fan
I've been reading for the last few months. There are some improvements that could be made in regards to adding more description and intensity to the dream sequences. The dialogue seems a little disjointed but there has been steady improvement in the story.
A note- Doc never went to springwood with Maggie during Freddys Dead. He remained at Central City and helped battle Freddy when she returned. I guess that Maggie would be in her 50/60s if this is set nearly two decades after Freddys Dead.
3/29/2019 c15 Darkness Takes Over
The premise of the story is good. Though you need to out more detail into descriptions of the scenes. Especially the dream sequences. They seem a little drab.
2/17/2018 c10 Guest
Then what happened?
11/19/2017 c5 DTO
The way the dream sequences are described is dull. Not much detail or suspense. Rather rushed. There should be a steady, sinister build up of tension. Make it creepier, darker. Freddy doesn't seem scary or dark enough, or even at all. There should be more terror and malevolence in the dreams, developing into horrifying nightmares. It's just too boring!

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11/12/2017 c3 DTO
Why would any parent who knows about Freddy and his dream powers tell their children about him? Why would they actually want to put their children in danger? It's idiotic!

The parents and town were trying to keep his memory hidden. To stop the nightmares and to stop him from coming back ! They eradicated or tried to destroy all the information about him after Freddys Dead.

It would make more sense if your OC discovered who he was on her own. By accident!

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