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7/8/2020 c42 Guest
Your story is good. I hope you will be able to continue it later on.
5/28/2020 c42 Sue
If you do the idea Xabrina said about Lydia becoming pregnant but, instead she should find out and panic about how it's going to affect her life and how she is going to tell BJ. She then could ask for advice from the Milton's and Ginger. After hearing the advice she should tell him while there still at the club and he could go into shock, disbelief, denial, angry, or become joyous. Lou can pop up and give Lydia a drink of the vile. She could pass out after thirty minutes and the Queen's hidden guards take her. In the process she could have a miscarriage and there can be a small amount of blood on the chair she was sitting on. BJ comes back looking for her and sees she's missing again. He notices the fresh blood on the chair and thinks she was attacked and taken. He could throw a fit and eventually find out it was Lou who followed the Queen's order. Lydia could wake up in the Prince's bedroom and see the Queen sitting on a chair ready to ask her questions. Lydia could smell the blood and breaks down and cry. The Prince walks in and thanks the Queen for bringing Lydia. The Queen leaves and the Prince approaches Lydia. He ask why she is crying and she could reply she had a miscarriage and keeps crying. He could become shock and questions how that's possible. He could try making her feel better but says the wrong thing and she starts throwing things at him causing him to leave. Later on she finds out it was the drink that had something to do with her miscarriage and she is royalty. BJ finally gets to her and she is thrilled to see him. While crying she tells him about the miscarriage and he is sad to hear. He holds her tight and pats her head internally crying as well. He says they have to leave. As he is leading her the way out she suddenly asks if he knew all along that she was royalty. He could avoid the question but knows she would know he's avoiding it indicating he knew. He said yes and is about to give her a reason why he didn't tell her but gets cut off. Ba'Gul can be the one who cut BJ off and try to take Lydia back to her room. There could be a cliff hanger whether they escape or if they get separated for good.
5/25/2020 c42 Xabrina
Have you read Ghost Wife or The Ghost Bride?
5/25/2020 c42 Xabrina
What is in the vile? Is it a love potion? Will it kill her? Are you going to have Lydia pregnant and not know? If you make her pregnant with Beetlejuice's kid would you make her have a miscarriage from drinking the vile that may have a poison that kills a life form? Will Lydia ever find out she is royalty?
4/1/2020 c42 poepoe911
Please come back. I would gladly even except a paragraph, I love this story so much. Until you do I'll just keep re-reading it. Hope all is well
1/13/2020 c42 Guest
i just finished this, and i know you haven't updated in over a year, but please please please finish this. I may actually die if I don't hear more about Beetlejuice, Lydia and the prince. tysm for giving me 42 chapters :)
9/26/2019 c42 Anonymous
Stumbled upon your fanfiction and loved it! You’re such a talented writer that I binge read the story until the end. I noticed that it’s been almost a year since you’ve updated, but I can assure you that there are fans still reading it, who would be happy to keep reading your stories.
11/18/2018 c42 Dontgotaclue88
Holy shit! This is so effin good! Super excited to read your next chapter. .
11/4/2018 c42 11Mordelle
I don’t know why you apologize at all! Any updates are gifts to us for writing and sharing your work. As usual, a delightful chapter. Your descriptions are always on point girl! Love it! I could see it all. The penny was a cool thing. I see where you’re going with it. I’m excited for the shot to hit the fan! Lol
9/16/2018 c41 Guest
I get so happy when I check back in to see that you posted. This was definitely a story after my own heart. Words can not describe how happy reading this makes me keep up the great work.
8/9/2018 c40 Guest
I am really enjoying your work. You capture the aspects of the characters very believably and build the suspense for the prince Vince plot very well. I can only imagine how shit is going to hit the fan when that little plot takes off and if that little vial is suitable for mortal consumption.
8/8/2018 c40 13Shadowess 88
Oh great. Beej is now an addict. He is going to continue doing whatever is necessary to get drunk off Lydia's affection that he is going to loose all sense of self. Next thing you know, Ludia is going to go out of her way to make him stay the vulgar ghost of the most he is. They'll be just fine until a rouge sandworm makes an appearance, then she adopts one, and calls it Juniper. I do like your character interactions! Very much
7/3/2018 c39 8cwsquared
I love it. It flows wonderfully and pulls you along for the ride without a second thought. I'm super worried for when shit hits the fan and Beetlejuice loses his mind. I hope nothing too bad happens to Lydia.
6/21/2018 c39 5ChaChaChaChan
Love it, can't wait for more!
6/4/2018 c39 11Mordelle
Ah! I reached the end? Damn. Guess I have to get back to my own fic now lol
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