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2/13 c1 1Pamela Hutchins
This is really good I hope you continue!
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12/9/2017 c1 Night-World-Person-Iron-Fey
Oh man oh man oh man!
This is super fantastic and makes me want to cry!
I love how you write about Mare taking a break from Ash and how their conversation went. And about Mare going to her Mothers grave.
It was really good and fun to read. But in Daughters of Darkness, it states that Mary-lynnette has blue eyes. I just wanted to say that unless you picture her having hazel.
Good luck for the next update! And remember to Stay Frosty my friend.
12/5/2017 c1 9Ana88
I really like the story's plot and your writing style; it will be interesting to see Mare in action once she decides to go and look for Ash ;).
However, I must admit the conversation between the two seemed a little off. I don't see why Mare's mortality would be a point of tension in their relationship, especially given that Ash is a lamia and could choose to grow older with her. I thought all that was settled at the end of Daughters of Darkness, but I guess they could still have awkward talks about it.
Looking forward to chapter 2.

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