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6/30/2018 c1 Username Placeholder
One of the things I adore w this fanfic is how it's both a stream of thoughts and events and emotions- like a montage of a bunch of things- and also presented in a way that's still like a story. Chronological. Sensical. All encompassing.

The diction and way its presented, with the short lines and parentheses and such, really makes these thoughts that are presented as a person has them. It's both whimsical, talking about love and grief and life and death, and also brutal and blunt- like Francis now talking only about hair color instead of emotions.

The topic itself is heartrenching, and it's one that is brought up in hetalia fanfics but never so masterfully as this. This sets the standard.
4/3/2018 c1 2009
I'm crying and I don"t even know why
I suppose that's good though
12/4/2017 c1 sasunaru13
arghhh my heartttt sobss. it hurtsss but it hurts goodd

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