12/17/2017 c1 S.M.F
I admit, I worried a little when I saw the summary combined with that title - but this went in a spectacular direction, and I can really believe this as Pluto's origin story as far as the Young Wizards 'verse goes! )
All your characters' voices feel distinct, and the situation of the 'Ng'a felt similar to that of the Tevaralti (though these people were much less understanding!). All in all, wonderful worldbuilding, and a joy to read.
Thank you for writing!
I admit, I worried a little when I saw the summary combined with that title - but this went in a spectacular direction, and I can really believe this as Pluto's origin story as far as the Young Wizards 'verse goes! )
All your characters' voices feel distinct, and the situation of the 'Ng'a felt similar to that of the Tevaralti (though these people were much less understanding!). All in all, wonderful worldbuilding, and a joy to read.
Thank you for writing!