10/22/2018 c1 crystal the optimist
I like this premise. It brings a new element to the story, which is difficult to find in lbtm fanfiction. I also found the characters to be in character, I just wish Elle would have been somewhat changed by her experience, and to actually get details of the trial - questions, reactions, the other victims' testimony, etc. Some more detail would have really thrown the story over the edge. All in all though, excellent fanfic. Thank you!
I like this premise. It brings a new element to the story, which is difficult to find in lbtm fanfiction. I also found the characters to be in character, I just wish Elle would have been somewhat changed by her experience, and to actually get details of the trial - questions, reactions, the other victims' testimony, etc. Some more detail would have really thrown the story over the edge. All in all though, excellent fanfic. Thank you!