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10/19/2020 c15 Lifeasweknowit14
Please don't kill koba!
10/7/2020 c5 24Mauryn
Hi again,

I feel like I missed a paragraph or two somewhere. First they are talking about letting her stay withAsh, but in the next sentence, she's passed off to koba? All I can ask is... Why? :) What happened, and did FFN maybe eat one or two of your paragraphs? It does happen once in a while.

Still, a part of me really likes the fact of Koba being made to be nice, as nice as he's able, to a needy human for a while. LOL!

And I love how Koba is reacting.
10/7/2020 c4 Mauryn
First favorite line, [Because the bastard named Carver has the window down and the harshly cold wind is coming inside the vehicle.] Yep, that's Carver through and through, no question.

and, last but not least, I vote we don't, I sign bitterly.
I'm glad to see that Talia has a little bit of pluck to her. I really was worried about that.

This was great, but oh man, talk about just dropping the bomb on the poor girl. LOL!
10/7/2020 c3 Mauryn
So why was the guy holding her and experimenting on her? and did the psycho die of the flu? I hope he didn't get of so easily.

Okay, one of my questions has been answered, "Why the heck was she taken up there in the first place?" LOL! I think she is safer with Malcom and the others, well, maybe not with gun happy Carver but you know... :)

I just have one small comment. No, two. :) I have no trouble at all seeing Alex taking home a helpless stranger. But I really never saw alexander as the type of boy who would deliberately make someone fall then laugh about it. That kind of makes him seem like a little jerk, no, it makes him seem like a little Carver.

And, maybe I'm wrong, but she's older than Alex, by a few years, right? So, why isn't talia packign her own things? It's her voice and her eyes that were stolen, but she seems to be able to walk well enough and use her hands well enough to sign. So, I'd think she'd be able to find her way around their own apartment and to pack her own clothes, extras needed or not? Or, is the family reall that overprotective of her? Because that happens sometimes, too.

I can't wait to read more.
10/7/2020 c2 Mauryn
I could have sworn I read and reviewed this ages ago... but maybe not.

Anyway, you're giving me chills reading this. Good grief, Poor girl!

I was going to ask who the Roman guy was, then I realized who you meant. LOL! forgive me, I'm an idiot.
10/4/2020 c13 1hermonine
Great chapters! Poor Talia back with the humans where most do not care. I hope you are doing well. So happy to see an update for this story. Keep up the great work and update soon!
9/30/2020 c12 Guest
I can't wait to see the next chapters soon.
9/21/2020 c12 2CCGhastly
Quarantine is alright, took a year off of uni cause I hate online classes. This story is actually amazing, I really like where you're taking Koba's characterization. I'm sorry that you're having a rough time, the spaced out updates are absolutely fine, this is not your obligation or your job, anything you feel up to is absolutely perfect and don't pet anyone tell you different.
All my well wishes!
9/17/2020 c12 yashagrl
Love the new chapters and can't wait for the new update!
9/17/2020 c12 3midnight84118
love it
9/16/2020 c12 Trunksymia
Yes!
9/16/2020 c12 Lifeasweknowit14
So excited for more! I honestly squeal when there's an update.
8/10/2020 c8 2CCGhastly
I wonder how bad her scars actually are? Awesome story!
2/21/2020 c8 4FlowerChild23
Wow wonder what will happen when they find out what happened to her. Please update soon.
2/20/2020 c8 2WyldwoodFaye
Good story so far! I like your OC! I keep wondering when she will share her tragic backstory...
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