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12/24/2020 c26 11d'elfe
Phew, Im so glad she is allright. Evelyn is rather indestructible when you think of it. Im glad Ryan knows now, it will make their life easier.
His retrospective was rather interesting as well, all those things he wondered about. He certainly will see Bruce differently now.
Merry christmas to you and thanks for that chapter.
12/23/2020 c25 daughterofthechief
Love it, you are so talented. Every update is a joy and I eagerly anticipate the next one. Thank you so much for all your hard work! xx
12/14/2020 c25 d'elfe
Damn ! And you leave us on the cliffhanger !
Well done, Evelyn, for remaining calm and saving Rachel ! Phew, this should change a lot of things for the future. Rachel's death was a turning point for Bruce.
Can't wait to see what comes next.
12/14/2020 c25 11mistressofdarkness666
Amazing chapter! Hard to read because of how tense I was haha But so awesome! I can’t wait to read more, please update soon!
11/13/2020 c24 PrincessMagic
OOOOHHHH! what a rollercoaster!
11/10/2020 c24 RoseeAnn
Oh, I don't know how to describe it. I like your story. No! That was incorrect. I LLOOOVVVEEE IT. the way you describe Evelyn is so good. I can perfectly picture her in my mind. A strong woman, yet not too OP. She is perfect as a vigilante. And her interaction with Bruce is just the way a comfortable and trust based relationship should've go. They have their moments where they realize their flaw, but they overcome it together. They support each other, and understand each other, and can be the voice of reason when needed. I wish to have a bestfriend like Evelyn. One more bestfriend like her could've done wonder to everyone's life. It's official, I am Evelyn Pendragon's fan, Author. Thank you for introducing her into our life, we really apreciate it. She is a god send. Or author send I guess
11/9/2020 c24 11d'elfe
So, I grabbed the cup of tea. Thanks for the warning.
Damn, I had been hoping that thunder's presence could have changed Rachel and Dent's fate... I am still hoping, a lot.

I loved the emotion in this chapter, you wrote the despair and guilt so very well. At last, I think they are starting to realise what they represent to each other. None too early, uh :)

Thank you for a great chapter. Can't wait to see what happens.
11/2/2020 c23 PrincessMagic
ooh wow brillaint chapter!
Loved Evelyn's relationship with her brother, and with Alfred! So funnY!
And Bruce being Done(tm) with Eve is great! Lol!
10/7/2020 c23 d'elfe
Wow, what a huge chapter !
I am surprised that Bruce brings women at the manor. I gathered he would be covered in scars and only keepong the pretense. That's bound to be discovered, right ?
So evelyn is not jealous at all. mm. Or perhaps the teasing is about being jealous after all :D

I loved the cafeteria scene. You write mundane things so well.

As for Gordon... yeah, it really did something to me just as well. I'm glad he's not dead, but Evelyn and Bruce are going to wallow a bit before they realise the cunning commissioner had planned it all. For once, they really are helpless.

I'm impatiently waiting to see what you make of Ryan in the future. You have plans, right ?

And most of all, I hope you get better. Cheers !
10/3/2020 c23 4Louise-Parrison
I completely adore this fanfic. I'd love to know how Bruce would react if he happened to walk in her with another guy.
10/3/2020 c23 7Cassie-011
I wonder how Bruce would feel is he walked on her and a guy from a night out lol
6/11/2020 c22 RoseeAnn
Thanks for the update. This story is my favorite batman fanfic. You did a great job Author
6/10/2020 c22 PrincessMagic
love this past couple of chapter! hope you and yours are safe and well x
6/8/2020 c22 11d'elfe
Hehehhe, that last bit of phonecall was really cute. Those were huge chapters, and even if it is difficult, for Bruce, to accept that Rachel never loved him entirely, I'm glad it is done.
At long last, he will start to realise how much they mean to each other. As for Ryan... he's going to get curious. Not good.
3/14/2020 c20 Nicole1024
Just love!
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