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9/3/2018 c1 jBSb4
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4/19/2018 c6 Dr Webster
You need an editor. There are many wrongly spelled words and a few poorly constructed sentences. However your idea is original and quite good. I look to see more of the adventures of your herald and her companion. Don't be overly concerned if you cannot see the errors I mention. It is hard to see ones own errors as you know better than anyone just exactly what you meant. An editor provides a fresh eye. He finds the errors and you correct.
2/5/2018 c6 7Tantris
You are building this story well.
1/7/2018 c3 Guest
It's an interesting story, but as others have mentioned, you should proofread it for spelling and grammar. Also, the last part of this chapter is a repeat of a prior part of the chapter.

It's been established in canon (Brightly Burning) that the attempted murder of a Herald trainee is a crime punishable by death. Even if the trainees didn't want to talk about it, the Companions would have immediately reported what happened.

Keep writing! :)
1/7/2018 c2 12Aaymeirah
Hello everyone, it's me, the author of this fanfiction. So I have received encouraging reviews that also say I need to proofread. I will do that for upcoming chapters and try to edit the existing ones in my unlimited spare time. (Slight sarcasm there.)
-From a guest I got a review saying that punishment for attempting to kill a Heraldic Trainee is Death. That even if the trainees didn't want to talk about it the Companions would blab. I can't believe I forgot that! So thank you guest for reminding me of that. I have made the appropriate changes.
-Tantris: Thanks for your review, You will find the answer to your question in my new and improved version of this chapter.
Thanks to all readers for bearing with me in my quest to write good fanfiction.

-Aay.
1/5/2018 c2 Guest
Tantris, Gjerah did tell Richenda to tell Dean Teren, but Richenda was too scared to do so.
1/5/2018 c3 4Reads-alot
Love the story, hope you continue writing.
1/4/2018 c1 Guest
has a lot of potential. proofreading would be beneficial, though. keep it up.
1/4/2018 c2 7Tantris
I am curious why Gjerah did not tell Richenda to talk to Teren.
1/2/2018 c1 Pegeen
A promising story following Meryl's choosing. Does need proof reading though. Don't stop now please.

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