3/18/2018 c1 Guest
Pretty Pink DINO:
Hey! It’s great to see someone writing, it’s a wonderful hobby that I’m glad you started. Your book is going great so far! But a little piece of information, do not rush your story. I know you want there to be drama and excitement in every chapter, but sometimes you need boring chapters to work up to the excitement. Filler chapters are OK. Other wise you’re doing great and are on the right path to succession!
Pretty Pink DINO:
Hey! It’s great to see someone writing, it’s a wonderful hobby that I’m glad you started. Your book is going great so far! But a little piece of information, do not rush your story. I know you want there to be drama and excitement in every chapter, but sometimes you need boring chapters to work up to the excitement. Filler chapters are OK. Other wise you’re doing great and are on the right path to succession!