10/7/2020 c16 Arika Koski
If this fanfic was a film would it be rated PG-13 or rated R?
If this fanfic was a film would it be rated PG-13 or rated R?
9/21/2020 c1 Guest
Please update this story soon! A year of no update for this type of story is too long...
Please update this story soon! A year of no update for this type of story is too long...
3/18/2020 c1 Guest
Still waiting for the next update. I keep checking on it for more...! Please don't abandon this story, I want to read how the poacher gets put in his place!
Still waiting for the next update. I keep checking on it for more...! Please don't abandon this story, I want to read how the poacher gets put in his place!
11/20/2019 c1 Interstate2011
"Cacky" is not the correct spelling, it's "khaki."
And "grey" doesn't appear to describe anything. Is it supposed to be shoes that it describes?
"Cacky" is not the correct spelling, it's "khaki."
And "grey" doesn't appear to describe anything. Is it supposed to be shoes that it describes?
8/30/2019 c14 Guest
Please please do not freeze or delete this work,it is fine. I hope that continuation of will soon. Good luck with your writing and more inspiration.
Please please do not freeze or delete this work,it is fine. I hope that continuation of will soon. Good luck with your writing and more inspiration.
8/30/2019 c14 Guest
Hello I recently stumbled on your work. And I really liked it,I hope that you do not throw or freeze or remove it. I look forward to continuing. Hope that it will soon. Thank you for your hard work.
Hello I recently stumbled on your work. And I really liked it,I hope that you do not throw or freeze or remove it. I look forward to continuing. Hope that it will soon. Thank you for your hard work.
8/22/2019 c8 Zora
Why did his name change? First it was Evan, then Keva, then Kevin, then back to Evan.
Why did his name change? First it was Evan, then Keva, then Kevin, then back to Evan.
2/16/2019 c8 Guest
Great story. Still waiting for more...
Great story. Still waiting for more...