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12/2/2020 c15 Steve Titus
Bravo, another amazing chapter! I have not read this one yet, until now, due to moving and real life stuff. Firstly, I hope you and the family are doing okay at this challenging times. Secondly, it might be sooner or later: Happy Holidays and Happy New Year! Lastly, keep up the good work. Nice story title change.

Steve Titus ((Dec 02 2020: 11:28 EST))
8/26/2020 c14 SteveTitus
Hi again. I realize your time on writing these chapters, are not based on the pandemic; but also, the creativity on the environments. Keep up the work. I am looking to more of this fanfic!
4/22/2020 c13 ST Da Echidna
Again, another great few chapters. I like how imaginative the scenery and atmosphere of the layout. It does make it feel uncanny for an amusement park to be placed London.

Also poor Penelope, yeah she is sort of evil; however, she usually gets the short end of the stick!

Keep up the good work! I will be waiting for the next chapters.
12/20/2019 c10 ST Da Echidna
I am so glad that you're back again. Despite the fact it took a whole year to wait for you to type again. I did enjoy this chapter; a decent build up on what is yet to come from this great fanfic. I also figure out the name of this mission.

Sly Cooper and the Gang in:
"The Riding Prestige"
12/14/2019 c1 lydiachlamydia
im gonna fucking kill myself
7/9/2018 c1 Idk
Why
6/7/2018 c2 Phantom thief
Welp, It's time to steal your heart from stopping you from making abominations like this. Why do your think this is okay?
4/3/2018 c4 ST Da Echidna
Onice again, nice chapter for the build up in the future plot. I can't wait to see how this all tied towards the ancestors and Sly's geass.
3/27/2018 c4 1Blake Valentine II
I like this fic, and i hope that you bring more chapters soon. As for the fart scenes with carm, make them feel natural, don't force them, but either way i don't mind
12/8/2017 c3 ST Da Echidna
I never thought I will be using this penname again. Listen man I enjoyed the story so far, and it is staying truthful with style of writing; albeit your spin on some things *hint*hint*.

If you're going to let scenes like Carmelita releasing 'tubas' on Sly, don't force them! It will come naturally just take your time, if you rush those moments then the audience will feel like it is a fetish-fest.

Also give Bentley and Murray some perspective chapters about their adventures and that one night Sly came back from that *smelly* with Interpol Inspector.
Just suggestions, I will keep watch.
11/8/2017 c1 Guest
Reading any of these fanfictions that involves farting..
It's like autism became a physical being, and then said being wrote a fanfiction.
10/23/2017 c1 Guest
Whelp, there goes my another part of my childhood

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