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7/30 c1 2Shadowhunter474
I sad... I was waiting for Crystal and Torrent to have a egg then I get happy cause they do but... Crystal left! Other then that it's been a great story, very detailed and well thought out. All in all, good story!
2/22 c148 Trev The Terror
Awesome story! Really, this thing slaps! Dumb random question that you aren't going to answer and I probably missed something but are Pyhrrian Mangrove and Orchid dead?
2/8 c148 2DonHp
I'm looking forward to seeing the story continue, it just keeps getting crazier as it goes along! I'll admit that at first I was a little skeptical about Antigonia, since it seemed to come almost out of nowhere, but I like where you went with it, and it almost acted like the main arc for Rising Flames, with the Blackice arc and Sunny's arc running through multiple stories. I liked the training sequence with Sunny and Jackal, and seeing Scarlet get put in her place is pretty satisfying. Not sure what to expect with the next story, especially if so many character's arcs conclude in just the first part! I have thoroughly enjoyed this story, and wish you luck with your future writings.
2/4 c96 12marvynthephoenix
review to dark seas recap Thanks, but I can barely read this giant wall of text lol
2/3 c138 Guest
That’s definitely an alternate world’s glory. I can’t wait to see the look on Blackice’s face when the two meet up!
2/3 c136 2DonHp
Dang, Ink's dead, Polar's dead, Glory's dead, now I'm just waiting for Galeem to show up and zap everyone else. Though, with that dark sludge stuff lying in wait, something similar could be waiting down the line.
I'm guessing it was Calamity finishing whatever he was doing with the Eye of Onyx that ended the drought, and that he wasn't actually sealed, but instead somehow escaped into Inferno. This whole world looks like it's falling apart at the seems, the black goo waiting to seep up through the cracks and finish the job. The end of this story almost feels like the end of The Empire Strikes Back, though even bleaker, despite the protagonists achieving the main goal they'd set out too. As easy as it would be to say that things could only get better from here, it's obvious that the real storm is yet to come.
2/2 c134 DonHp
My guess right now is that they're in some sort of time loop, ending whenever some nebulous entity consumes the world and it starts anew. Ink and Fracture can have visions of past iterations.
This story is starting to remind me of Alternate, specifically when Pyrrhia was destroyed in it, where the world is faced with an unfathomable evil and tons of characters are getting killed or thrust into situations outside of the canon. The events of the past are already meddled with, and now the entire world is spiraling out of control. I still think Dark Seas is my favorite of the series so far, as it feels like a natural extension of the canon series, though I am intrigued as to where this is going, and how these dragonets will face whatever lies beneath Pyrrhia. Too bad Fracture had to die though...
1/22 c147 12marvynthephoenix
Please update soon! Begging you! PLease tell me when you will update please please please this is my FAVORITE WOF story PLEASE update
1/22 c145 marvynthephoenix
NOOOooOOOOooo
1/21 c144 marvynthephoenix
Review to ch41: Oh. My. God. Animus Magic AHHHHh i'm freaking out! The Ice Dragon is REAL? Holy hell!
Review to chapter 42: I finally know what's wrong with Aurora! Omg! She's just a good guy who's got the wrong idea!
Review to chapter 43: Can you BeLEIVE that ACTUALLY Aloe isn't even evil! Oh. My. Freaking. Heck. AHHHHH!
Review to chapter 44: So I guess Calamity isn't that bad? Just morally gray? But the horror...that scares me. Also how do you do horror-text?
Review to chapter 45: oooh. No. Who is Copper? But anyways OH NO LILIANA you hAVE to STOP you IDIOT!
Review to chapter 46: Neato! Ruthless!Sunny is a Sunny I like. I jope her and Aloe can compromise. I like them.
1/21 c142 marvynthephoenix
Chapter 27 Review: WHEN WILL AURORA THINK FOR HERSELF?!
1/20 c140 marvynthephoenix
Just want you to know I added your story to my community!
1/20 c141 marvynthephoenix
yesss! Perfectido!
1/19 c147 QuiteARandomFan
Well, chapter 133 was a bit unfortunate news, but it's understandable. As far as I'm concerned, this being an OC fic is part of what makes it so interesting. I rather like quite a few characters from this series, even if they seem prone to pull a Sean Bean on you - yes, I'm talking especially to you Nightreader, Ink and Polar (though the latter apparently to a lesser extent). But I've come to especially like Torrent, Crystal (before she left and turned really murderous), Nightreader, Ink, Polar and Midnight - and now Aurora is becoming more and more interesting too.

As for what followed chapter 133, I'm glad you decided to upload what you had written anyways. Knowing now what followed, it'd have been quite unfortunate not to have gotten to read the rest of Stone Cold and all of Rising Flames.

It has certainly been quite eventful. Everything leading up to the battle against Calamity, Ploar's death (sacrificing himself on a wrong assumption), followed by Ink's death adding to the tragedy - Ink never even having gotten the chance to meet Midnight or make peace with Torrent. All that followed by Glory's death, leading over into Blackice's attempted genocide of the NightWings. Then there's Liliana's threat from one of the alternate worlds and the reveal of Trustbreaker's origins, the individual adventures of Midnight and Ecru, Tiger and her friends and everyone else, and what happened with Aurora.

Binge read indeed, it's all been very interesting. Too bad the rest of my weekend was to short to keep going. But I'll certainly keep an eye out for when you do decide to write part 1 of Broken Skies. Either way, thank you for almost 700k words of reading so far :)
1/18 c133 Guest
Yours is my favorite because the OCs fit with the story and it Works ! So good job
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