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4/6/2020 c78 Nightwolf300
This story is awesome and I like your creativity with inserting the OC Lily into the totally Spies series and/or universe because and the way that since the spy trio becomes a quartet meaning a group of four and with each story I come across I’m amazed of how when someone adds something to a story and the good guys get an edge the balance comes in and sees to it that the villains gain an edge to even it out like how LAMOS gaining extra members like Doctor V, The Brain, and William the mole agent though some of the story is tragic it’s still Fantastic. I really like the part because the spies thwarted Helga before Lily came into the picture it shocked her to learn there was a fourth spy and that because of who she’s related to she’s basically the most dangerous of them at least I think that might be how it works and it’s funny that Myrna was able to realize why Lily wasn’t feeling well during her first evil scheme although she did receive a hint like if someone made a sarcastic remark to her saying “wow you actually have a brain in that head of yours” because she’s not really a big threat and also I like the Time Travel parts of the story at first I thought that the betrayal of Bryony unintentionally was caused by Lily when she took Clovers place in stopping Jerry from meeting Boogie Gus and Bryony saw and you maybe know how it can go with a lady seeing a man she is interested in with another girl grabbing him but that was shot down when I read how it actually went down with the fake letters sent by Lily’s criminal Aunt and Uncle as a long-standing revenge scheme against Jerry that robbed Lily of her chances of a better life and because of them her mother was cold to her and because of her life taking a turn for the worst she’s allowed here hatred to fester for 18 years or 19 it will quite possibly take a long time for her to listen because from the second time travel mission even though they put a stop to the whole Mandy turning everyone in the world into her but even though they made it so the whole Mandy issue never happened but some parts of that future could be unavoidable because why would Lily’s Mother and Uncle move to Europe and it worries me that worst case scenario at least the Lewis family gains a new family member and please don’t laugh at what I say but I asked my mom what would likely happen when the time comes for Grandma Lewis to meet her granddaughter Lily and she said good for the Granddaughter but she may be a bit hard on her son for not telling her and man when they learn their Mother/Grandmother was secretly a retired spy it will be maybe twice as shocking and hopefully when the whole thing is brought to a stop they can sit down and explain everything because from what I’ve read in the teaser it seems that Lily moving in with the girls is inevitable because of the circumstances because it happened in the future where Mandy was set on world domination because some time traveling movies and tv shows have taught me that time can be rewritten but some events are set in stones but it’s not set just because you’ve had a vision because I’ve also learned this phrase from terminator "the future is not set there’s no fat but what we make for ourselves." Although it seems that Lily’s dividend family was an event what will not be easily fixed because Angus might be willing to listen but Bryony currently she seems like a lost cause and just when she was seeming to want to change but sadly it also looks like she’s moving on in a bad way for Lily since because of certain complications Angus has made it so she may get together with a certain man and it will cost her and Angus and eventually if it gets far enough a lot of resentment may arise like if the time comes for Lily to find them and she sees them happy part of me likes when I get the chance to use this "this is a dark day" because it will break Lily’s heart and put her in her mothers position of betrayal in which they moved on from her... well you get the idea but it could also be that the two are too over come with guilt and afraid to makeup because sadly Bryony let her hatred cloud her judgment and sadly when it comes down too Angus’s loyalty he’ll betray Lily and it will be a complete flip of the hatred script where instead of hating her father she’ll feel hatred betrayal for her Mother and Uncle and back to the prophesied future the real question is why did Bryony and Angus move to Europe this could answer that because Lily chose her loving father over her mother who if she had to say is 18 years to late because of the phrase you’re actions have consequences which I’m thinking Bryony will have to face. I would just like to say that this story is truly amazing and one of the best I’ve come across so keep it up because you’re awesome.
4/5/2020 c41 Gundam Emperor00
I was expecting to see Lily becoming a cavegirl too like Alex.
11/6/2019 c77 42Light Seeker 001
You're not going to have GLADIS thrown away like in the show, are you? She wasn't THAT annoying.
11/5/2019 c74 Light Seeker 001
Ever thought of having Terrence cloned in the future? That always worked with Spider-Man villain, the Jackal.
11/5/2019 c78 Light Seeker 001
Is the teaser Totally Busted?
10/13/2019 c77 supboyyyyy93
Nooooice! A Bryony chapter, i definitely like it and i agree that it was an important chapter to make for the story. I can't wait for Bryony and Jerry to have their reunion and see how Angus and the girls will react to the fireworks that'll probably take place given how angry bryony still is. Lily's best moment in my opinion was actually just before she became a woohp agent, when she and Jerry saved everyone from Sebastian when he hypnotised everyone to take down woohp. Great job with the chapter, i really enjoyed it. Please update soon!
9/14/2019 c76 6LaViolaViolaRosa
This was awesome.
9/7/2019 c75 supboyyyyy93
NNNNNOOOOOOOO! Lily's bonds with Angus and Allison took a huge nose dive, things aren't looking so good for Lily, poor Lily i feel bad for her, she loves being a spy but it has completely ruined her relationship with her uncle and non-spy best friend. I really hope everything turns out ok. To answer the question last chapter, i'd say the saddest moment in totally spies that i've seen so far was when Alex quit because she thought she was a worse spy than Brittany, thank god she came back in the same episode. Seriously, there is no totally spies without the 3 main girls and Jerry...and GLADIS, i don't care what anyone says, Gladis is great. As for this chapter's question there are two running gags i like above all others, Jerry's antics: I know i complain lot about Jerry seemly making rash and stupid decisions and assumptions from time to time but one thing i could never say about Jerry is that he isn't funny, the guy is freaking hilarious, i mean come on, his Ice J persona was by far the funniest thing i've ever seen totally spies. Now the second gag is the rivalry between Clover and Mandy, those two are ALWAYS doing some of the most outrageous things i've ever seen, not only that but most of the time it's over the dumbest things too, like getting a guy's attention, fighting over looks and fashion, who's going to have their picture in the front page of the yearbook, cheerleading...nails...i STILL don't understand how breaking a nail could lead someone to basically rule over Beverly Hills, i just can't stop shaking my head in absolute disbelief and amazing at the lengths these two would go to get a leg up over the other lol, i can't say i don't enjoy it though, i loved the giant episode lmao. I got to ask, you don't consider what dr. v did to lily as brainwashing? He did technically brainwash lily into doing his bidding. Please update soon, great job with the chapter by the way.
8/25/2019 c75 LaViolaViolaRosa
Oh snap! This is so awesome!
8/5/2019 c73 supboyyyyy93
THAT SHIT WAS CRAZY YO! LOL, THAT WAS GREAT, TERRENCE HAD COMPLETELY GONE INSANE. I wonder how sherry will take hearing of her brother's demise, how his hatred for jerry became his own undoing. Is this the first time the girls saw someone die or death in general? I think you should make a chapter about how the girls will deal with the feelings that comes with something that traumatic. Great chapter, god i enjoyed the heck out of that last part of the chapter. I know you gave a heads up that something big was going to happen but damn i didn't think it was going to be like this lol. Please update soon. RIP MY BOI TERRENCE, I JUST REMEMBERED WHAT'S JERRY'S MOTHER GOING TO THINK?
8/4/2019 c72 supboyyyyy93
YYYOOOOOO! Damn Terrence, you gonna do Boogie gus like that? I love it lol, this is why i like fanfiction so much, i love how people could take canon material and make it better. Loving this chapter. Most annoying villain, normally i'd say Boogie gus with how annoying and dumb he is but even he almost succeeded when he freaking rewrote history, but from the top of my head i'd say it's a tie between the fake hollywood director and that winter guy with that obsession with chess and clover. That was just wtf is that. Im sure there some more annoying villains but those 2 pop up at the top of my head.
7/16/2019 c71 supboyyyyy93
lol, i keep telling you that jerry's old age is catching up to him, great skills but no common sense. LOVED THE CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT FROM BOTH LILY AND JERRY, SOOOOO GLAD YOU DECIDED TO DO THE EPISODE! Maybe now jerry will listen to someone with more common sense then he has, geez. I don't know much about voice actors in this show, i didn't really pay any mind about the voice acting because it was great in all the seasons i've watched but if i had to pick one i'd with sam's voice actor just because sam is my favorite character. But again, the voice acting was great, i thought the VA's did an excellent job staying in character.
7/12/2019 c70 supboyyyyy93
Ahhhh, there's nothing better than great character development. I think Lily is coming along just fine and also i loved the parts with arnold in it, it was nice it see his interactions with lily. Ohhhh man, Angus does NOT look happy, i hope he doesn't do anything to harsh to lily or jerry. Ice J and Angus are my bois, man, we ride and die together TO THIS DAY! As for my favorite piece of the show's ost, i hope you can help me find it since i can't find it anywhere, it's the theme that plays when alex, clover, and GLADIS were fighting(holding off really) evil jerry, in the evil jerry episode. Send me a pm to tell me if you can or can't find it, i'd really appreciate it. Great job with the chapter and i hope you update soon.
7/1/2019 c69 supboyyyyy93
Loved the interaction between Lily and Arnold, she might have a temper but she's also got a heart unless those morons as she puts it. It also seems that Lily is still prone to have outbursts of anger, now she "only has one shot, one opportunity" before she gets expelled. But i got to say good for her breaking Mandy's nose, i got to give it to Mandy, she could get the shit beaten out of her and she STILL TALKIN THAT MESS! Hope Lily could control herself or she'll really get into some shit. My favorite season finale is also 'Evil Promotion Much' because of obvious reasons lol, the best villain in the series in my opinion is introduced. Great job, please update soon.
7/1/2019 c68 supboyyyyy93
YOOOOOOOO! Angus knows that its Jerry! I can't wait to read the next chapter, as a matter of fact im going to read it right now! Also, there are a freaking shit ton of WTF moment so i don't remember all of them but i know of at least 3...
3. When that Guy's kid used the TV cartoon show to hypnotise all the kid in the world who saw the show because his dad didn't pay attention to him.
2. That old lady who was making those girl scout cookies irresistible to the point where people will only buy their cookies and become extremely fat.
1. The best WTF moment i can think at the moment was definitely that one episode where Mandy breaking a nail had somehow(regardless of how stupid it was, but let's be honest everyone besides Sam is or was stupid at some point in the show) lend to Mandy controlling Beverly Hills. To this day, that episode shows just how stupid people in that so are. To this day, im shaking my head in disbelief no joke -_-,
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