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4/18 c2 42Light Seeker 001
It's been a long time since you updated this story, I almost forgot about it.
2/5 c1 17evolution-500
Really good work with this. It looks very promising so far! :D
1/14 c2 3Techne
It's been a while since I've sat down to read this story and the release of a second chapter completely flew over my head because of work. Fret not, for I am finally going to get to it. Maybe then I can continue catching up on Asylum Games, eh? XD

Samuel and Wendy remind me of that family who has just moved into the rich neighborhood and is taking in the sights of the other wealthy families around them. Amanda is as bright as ever, shes going to be a great contribution to the city once shes older before it begins to go south. She seemed so happy with what she'd done and, of course, that asshole had to shoot it down. Get used to it, girl, its going to happen a lot for you. I liked seeing you touch on the already crumbling economy right out the gates for Rapture at such a young age for itself, it spells disaster for them most definitely. Wow, way to be a cock block right at the end, eh? Andrew Ryan you dog you! Hopefully they'll be able to work something out eventually.
11/2/2020 c1 Arthur
As someone who is new to reading fan fiction this was definitely an interesting read. It is interesting to read a new story with new characters that is based on something I love so much. I love how this work ties together characters we know with characters that are completely new creations of your own. This story takes a really interesting look at what life must have been like for those new to rapture and just how tough it must have been to survive in such a place. Reading your story really got my imagination going for all the stories like these of the people trying to make it in rapture. Excellent job. I would certainly like to read more.
10/13/2020 c2 12ROCuevas
Really good job.
10/13/2020 c1 2merendinoemiliano
Curious to see your next plans
10/13/2020 c2 merendinoemiliano
Quite well written beginning
9/8/2017 c1 3Techne
It's great to see you back in the game after I think two years of radio silence? Regardless, you came back strong, girl! Also, it's been so long that I don't really remember much about the original story.

Samuel Copeland is in the game, right? It's been about six months since I played the game and not many of the names actually kept with me so forgive me if I don't remember him. Either way, a chef is an interesting character trait. Usually its either some random soldier or a in general a person with firearms experience. His meeting with Ryan was both strange and rewarding. While Ryan does seek the best, it does strike me as odd that he would single out a chef. I get it, though, he needs good cooks and all, but to me it just seems strange, but Ryan is a pretty strange person anyways.

Two years later and they're in rapture, living it up and having a happy life for the moment. As we both know, this won't last for long and I suspect that Amanda is going to be shifted as our protagonist so I don't expect much from Samuel. So what could her talent be? I actually would like to see her follow in her fathers footsteps. If not that, perhaps maybe a musician or a singer? Something out of the norm that would give them access to the razzle and dazzle of rapture. Just throwing some thoughts out there, as always.

I look forward to more of this! And again, it is so damn great to see you back in business!
9/5/2017 c1 12ROCuevas
A good start.
9/5/2017 c1 42Light Seeker 001
Very interesting. I've got to get interested in BioShock.

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