Just In
Community
Forum
More
for string theory

11/5/2020 c1 lolo
wow so amazing never seen anything better wow :o
8/25/2020 c7 AtlasNinja13
This is a really unique format! I like how you start from different moments in time, without much background, yet the reader still has an idea of what is going on and the emotions the characters are feeling. To be honest, I usually am more of a fan of the more traditional chapters instead of drabbles since they feel incomplete, but you definitely make it work!

I find it interesting how you portray Puck and Sabrina to always keep their relationship the same (when you mention their pact in this chapter). I strongly believe that even after they got together, their core relationship of arguing and challenging each other (while still being incredibly protective) would never change.

Thank you for this story!
8/21/2020 c7 56Curlscat
I love the rhythm you've got going this chapter, it's excellent 3
8/18/2020 c6 45OakeX
you're on tumblr? I just followed you (I hope; I hope I didn't follow the wrong person) - I'm citrus-carnations (a ridiculous name and one I really got depretentiousfy once I think of a replacement)

I CANT for the life of me remember if ive told you this before but you write great dialogue. like you write distinctive voices for dialogue, so you can tell who the character purely based on vocab and structure, rather than you having to explicitly point out that puck said this or Sabrina said that (although I do appreciated that too HAHAHHA)
that's also something I think is really tricky (esp cause when I write (bad) dialogue, I tend to just write it in my voice and so everyone sounds the same) but you do it really nicely. you do it so nicely that when I read your stories, the little voice in my head which does the reading (like when I read silently, a voice is my head is reading out to me what my eyes are reading and I'm hearing that voice and that's how I read silently? if that makes sense? I hope it does) the little voice affects different voices for the different characters, cause that's how distinct your dialogue seems to be
tl;dr (or didn't understand) you write good dialogue, and I think your writing reads like music
8/18/2020 c5 OakeX
oh my god you wrote it
oh my god I never read it

I'm trying to write FF for a different fandom (whoops) and thought I'd check out my old ffn friends for inspo and I can't believe it you updated
and it's beautiful
there's an (to steal curlscat line) intrinsic kind of musicality to this and i love it - idk how you do it, but I do know that I'm jealous af
I'm trying to think of a clearer way to phrase musicality. I guess what I mean is the sentences don't jar? when you write, there's a clear progression of ideas and emotions from word to word, like youre watching a video as 1 one smooth animation rather than frame by frame, still by still, if that makes sense
which is really hard to achieve (I think) and is something you're really good at
8/11/2020 c6 D
love these drabbles
also just curious since i reread your obscurum (can’t spell) fanfic, will you finish it or is it just not gonna be continued? sry if i sound rude i’m just curious TvT
8/7/2020 c6 56Curlscat
1: awwwww

2: i'm campaigning HARD for a dyslexic puck headcanon and i see the opportunity here to push my agenda

3: what kind of pirates ARE they, then?

is it the pandemic that's dragging people back into their old fandoms or are we just all collectively feeling nostalgic?
8/1/2020 c5 Curlscat
this chapter is so... musical. Sad, but with a beauty to it. Great job. Fitting for filling a prompt for oakex, the angst king
8/1/2020 c4 Curlscat
your habit of just kinda like. starting scenes in the middle with no real introduction? whole-ass mood right there. Lovely as always 3
8/1/2020 c3 Curlscat
Hello i am eighty four years late but i have been cleaning out my email notifications in an attempt to return somewhat to fandom life and i was like "oh i remember enjoying this person's writing" so here i am!

ok the idea of sabrina as a fic writer is amazing bc i love to project onto this child but ALSO i would love it if you actually fleshed out a star wars au for this tbh (not a HUGE fan of the star wars movies, but the extended universe is so rich, y'know?)
7/30/2018 c4 Simmy
ITS KURAMA EVERYONES GONNA DIE WHERES NARUTO WHEN U NEED HIM
3/24/2018 c5 11oo
Ohmigosh you're back!
Okay, so, I don't think I reviewed before, and I'm sorry about that. Also, I have no concrit, because this was awesome (and I have no idea how to give feedback. sorry).
But, honestly, you're an amazing writer, and I'm so, so happy you updated.
I'm really picky about what puckabrina fics I read now because I'm used to your characterization.
thankyouthankyouthankyou!
11/23/2017 c4 45OakeX
JAEGER
YOU KNOW
THE MAIN CHARACTER IN AOT'S LAST NAME IS JAEGAR

awww rooftop skywatching
thats so cliche but cute
naww

i like how you write drabbles
theyre cute and simple; theyre the sort of thing you read while you're waiting for your Batman game to load

I AM WAITING ON DOVE
10/23/2017 c3 29OctaviaWithStarsForEyes
*peeks out from the rock I've been living under*
hello.
I've been...gone. For a while.
Soz.
But I'm back, and wow this is so cute, so just thought I'd drop a review telling you so. The star wars au is lovely, and I like how you kept the overall light heartedness of the Puckabrina banter. The both of them are so nice and I love the way you write them. Perfect balance of angst and fluff and whatever's in between.
Okay I'm just gonna go now.
Great job ;)
10/16/2017 c3 45OakeX
star wars
you anakin padma fangirl
i cant believe i actually watched the phantom menace cause you begged me to do it
i really am such a nice guy
*sparkles and shines in the moonlight*
*all edward cullen style*
*but like, fifty-four times more attractive*

hey hey but this is good
very cute little excerpts
i had a drabble story once
man i should really get back into that

but nawwww yeah this is great, you do a really good job of keeping your story plot-oriented but still intimately descriptive
and i love your comic timing. perfect punchline execution
which is something a lot of drabbles dont do well, but you seem to do pretty good

OH I HAVE A WORD FOR YOU:
dove
lets see how you spin that
21 Page 1 2 Next »

Twitter . Help . Sign Up . Cookies . Privacy . Terms of Service