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7/28/2020 c19 Guest
Hello, if your still there, can you please try to finish up the story? I like to see how it ends!
2/12/2020 c19 Noxy the Proxy
This is really good. I wondered where Derek had gotten to. I wonder what happens next.
10/13/2019 c1 Guest
i saw your deviantart page why not reunite caesar with alpha
9/3/2019 c19 Guest
Your fic is awesome! I love the characterization and don't worry about your OC's, they came off naturally! Can't wait to see where the story goes!
7/10/2019 c19 Lizzy
I hate the colonel
Update soon!
11/8/2018 c17 5BeetZel
Hello, sorry for commenting as of late but a comment nonentheless is better later than never right?

The plot is, again, so interesting to read and figure out. So many questions and so many answers that is needed. I am thoroughly enjoying your long chapters as it keeps us so entertained in what you have in store for us.

As for what is happening with everyone so far, I'm rather intrigued with what and how everyone else is taking everything. Why are certain apes being targeted only? What is the main purpose of McCullough's torture among the apes. What is Will and Caroline doing to help solve the predicament that everyone is in? Who are the ones that they can truly trust and is there a mole among the ranks of the folks of San Francisco? I'm sure there is a mole, otherwise they're wouldn't be all these occurrences happening so close to everyone.

But most of all, I am definitely intrigued by the apes and their particular stories. Of course we know Caesar's, Koba's and Dolly's-ish, but I am happy you are expanding on the latter two with their introduction into the ape colony and not knowing how to act around their own kind. Of course it would be that way, they've been lab rats their whole lives mostly and I am excited on where you are taking them. Not just Koba and Dolly, but you're giving light to the apes whom were considered villains themselves, ala Red, Pope and Winter, who betrayed the apes. I'm eager to see what you have planned in store for us and will wait to see what they are.
11/4/2018 c17 Guest
Fave chapter was 11 x
10/27/2018 c17 Guest
PLEASE UPDATE I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH XXX
10/26/2018 c17 megascopstrichopsis
Gripping and disturbing as always. You never fail to make me anxious for the next chapter. I always loved the fact that you took the original premise and turned it into something familiar but also completely different in a way...Oh wow! This story is over a year old now?! It seems like only yesterday when War for the Planet of the Apes came out...Anyways, keep up the good stuff! Have fun writing! I sure as hell had fun reading :)
10/22/2018 c17 110ZabuzasGirl
Wonderful!
Update immediately, please!
9/26/2018 c16 Galaxiis
Oh my God, I love it! I love the story, how you deal with the characters, the hurt, the drama, everything! I love it how you subtly make points in half-sentences that get me hooked (Alex hoping not to forget the chimp with the brown hair - Hazell, I guess? - or Milo thinking Dolly is beautiful), I am so curious how you will write the characters and everyone's pasts and curious how everybody will turn out. Rose, for example, and Tori and Koba?

I love it! Keep up the great work! This story is getting better and better!
9/10/2018 c16 8MeZaKi93
Oh, it's been really long since I left a review for this story, and it is just getting better and better!

All the things that are happening, all the character moments, interactions, inner worlds - feelings and thoughts - and all the events, your way of writing trauma, the revelations... they all work just as they should!

I love how you wrote all the different perspectives, from Preacher's memories of how he got to know Hazell, their evolution, to Dot and Pope, Pope's fighting with his demons and memories, Koba, oh, Koba... his nightmare and the aftermath, someone finally realizing he needs a psychologist (okay, all of them would need one, but Koba, Dolly and Pope would have needed one LONG ago) and finally setting him on that road with a specialist, him and Tori, their relationship, Cedar and Grey, Rocket and Ash, Caroline's memories of Red, Rose, Milo thinking of Dolly as more beautiful than he remembered...

I could go on and on, I love what you're doing here, I love how you weave the plot and play with our feelings as well as the characters'. Do everything you planned, don't be afraid of anything, show us everything you feel like, you have created quite a detailed storyline here. This is going great, and I do hope you will continue! Give it your best, because the results are great! Keep it up! ;)
9/10/2018 c16 110ZabuzasGirl
Wonderful!
Update immediately, please.
9/10/2018 c1 ZabuzasGirl
Wonderful!
Update immediately, please!
8/1/2018 c16 MARTIsamWINCHESTER
Hey i see that Tori and Koba are less the main characters i think it’s sad because they are my favorites anyway still can’t wait for another chapter !
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