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11/30/2020 c1 Guest
Not bad.
11/30/2020 c2 andsuico29
Max doesn't feel right in this story, he's supposed to be more like a silent character.
2/2/2018 c1 Radio Free Death
Hey there! If I can suggest something improve your story? Know when you break paragraphs before you post. The story is just one block of text. Remember that you start a new paragraph when you introduce a new speaker or action.

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