5/28/2018 c3 ExMarkSpot
I can’t wait for them to get to the “I said, can I get an amen?”
I can’t wait for them to get to the “I said, can I get an amen?”
5/19/2018 c3 1LoVeInVaInTrYsTiLl
I like this! the OC's fitting in well with the storyline so far, and the story itself is flowing well. Good job! keep up the good work can't wait for more!
I like this! the OC's fitting in well with the storyline so far, and the story itself is flowing well. Good job! keep up the good work can't wait for more!
5/19/2018 c1 LoVeInVaInTrYsTiLl
alright! I like where this is going, and the fact that they are questioning things and love Bogart I'm with him on those damn cut outs
alright! I like where this is going, and the fact that they are questioning things and love Bogart I'm with him on those damn cut outs
11/5/2017 c2 Mefist Dragon
This is going well...Hmmm...I imagine you will be using some of the recent updates to the previous chapters to tell this tale?
This is going well...Hmmm...I imagine you will be using some of the recent updates to the previous chapters to tell this tale?
10/31/2017 c1 icecrusher736
Good solid start! Can’t wait to read the next chapter! Just a suggestion, build up your characters personality through their actions if you can, that way you don’t stop the flow of the story. Your doing great
Good solid start! Can’t wait to read the next chapter! Just a suggestion, build up your characters personality through their actions if you can, that way you don’t stop the flow of the story. Your doing great