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5/27/2019 c5 1Riley Andersen
update pls

Pf, gotta say it though. This story got me SO hooked I can't wait for the next chapter.

Great execution and I really LOVE the way you wrote this story out to look like an actual game makes me wanna scream at the top of my lungs.
6/14/2018 c2 18Svinorita
I like how much effort you have put into writing this story so far! Your knowledge of hockey is truly impressive and the way you presented this chapter is so realistic that it almost feels like we are watching an actual game unfolding :)

Another thing I found interesting was that Riley is apparently the only female player in these playoffs and I'm curious to see how she holds her own against all those male players on the other team! As for which team I think will win the League Finals in the end...I'm going to have to say the Foghorns :)

Keep up the good work! You're doing great :)

Svinorita.
6/13/2018 c2 6RedHotAnger2015
So far, I like the setup. It feels like I'm actually watching the pre-game commentary on TV. As for the story I do believe that Riley and her team could win. It won't be easy. But do you believe in miracles?

Can't wait to actually read some ice hockey action.

You're a gifted writer.
4/26/2018 c1 18Svinorita
I'm curious to see how this story pans out! It's a really original idea and you're right, there aren't many stories that I'm aware of that focus primarily on Riley whilst excluding the Emotions (I am a HUGE fan of the character Fear :)

Still I am always eager to check out something new or an idea that hasn't been explored yet, and so far you have done a great job my friend! I personally don't know much about hockey (I prefer Motorsports and if you looked at my profile, you would have noticed that I am very fond of Rallying!) But I liked how well researched this chapter was and I'm interested to see how you write about Riley's upcoming game against the Mighty Ducks!

Also thank you so much for the shout out and I'm really happy that you enjoyed "Mall-A-Palooza" :) I hope you have fun writing after your break and welcome to the Inside Out fandom!

Svinorita.

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