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7/14 c10 4Darth Necron
Ah on a roll eh? Then lets see what's going on in these Farplanes.

Paradise can be rather hollow if the person your looking for is not there I suppose. Still, if this after life is not bound to one universe well, that could get rather messy fast lol. Well, it seems the after life is not pure heaven but still not as bad as some after lives like Soul Society in Bleach, could be worst.

Still, things might go to hell for real if things go ary with this cry to help from Roll, and back in the world of the living things have already gone to hell as the rest try and figure out how to get Chad's soul back into his body, at least his body is trying to help lol.

Always awkward when your place of work is under new management, double so when its a divine authority and all.

Between callous parent scientists and callous gods treating entire universe's as a game no wonder things are so bleak here...still better then if Zeno was in charge lol.

Meanwhile Chad's trip to the depths of hell ramps up to nightmare levels as we have another reunion with Richard, Hell really needs to improve its security, need a better health plan I guess.

Thankfully there is two Chad's for the price of one, and Nameless, Chad's almost reaching Loki from the recent Marvel show's level of having conflicting other versions to deal with, if you can't trust yourself you know things are bleak.

Sadly even with another Chad , after finding out the extent of how insane this Richard is, Chad 3's in for one rough time with how much Richard trolled him...guess we will see just how bad it gets next time but till then best of luck after another great chapter.
6/27 c9 Darth Necron
Ah nice right after Chad's own update...lets see how abrupt this end is. ( cracks neck)

Alright...we start off right off the bat with some heavy stuff as the likes of Aku and Darksied are not quite easy to off...making this ominous 12 claw figure rather intriguing.

Seems like Chad's starting to crack either under the pressure or under everyone using his body as a proxy...doh. Medi is starting to evolve from the pressure? Not sure what this will lead to but...could be interesting as long as its not another killing spree lol.

And...if Blue's mad now...wait till he finds out Chad is dead. I'm not sure if this is Chad's ultimate doom, it is rather sudden and not sure who between Ellie, Blue or Richard would get main lead role...and the " Higher ups" Are clearly not happy with this turn of events as its causing a bit of divine corporate restructuring with Castiel now being given" Command"...lets hope Lu Blu is not as fickle as Chuck was.

AND on top of that we got Dark Elf's and Vampires plotting more stuff to get back at Chaos..., and Richard maybe might be heading to a new level of insanity as he's commanding the likes of Trigon like its nothing while snacking on deities...oh my.

And now we got this other Roll? The original or something? Hopefully things work out on your end so we can get the answer to this sooner or later because we do have a lot of things up in the air at the moment.

Keep up the intense work and stay safe.
2/6 c8 Darth Necron
Ah welcome back, glad the plague has not crushed neither your body or soul...and speaking of souls lets see how the dark soul users are doing.

Well...everyone wants to figure out what makes Richard tick before he dooms everyone, and we see just how haunted Chad is by his one time ally, the worst betrayals are the ones you did not see coming and all.

Of course not like Chad's darkness is the only thing to worry about when Kefka's own madness is spreading quite a lot of darkness and pain.

You know your dealing with seriously insanely powerful people when the likes of Trigon are just seemed as pawns...good greif.

Well...Kefka's playing a painful game that's causing greif for Ellie and the others, though Richard trolled him good so this could lead to some villain wars...as if things were not chaotic enough.

And after all this Chad's " Alter ego" seems firmly in the drivers seat, but sounds like things are going to escalate to a whole deeper level of hell...hope it does not take to long to find out just what is the result of all this out burst...but till then keep up the great work, stay safe and hopefully till next time.
2/6 c8 1Keyblader Chad
As always, a fun and good chapter to read through. The wait as always is worth it. Said it to you already but I'll say it again: Happy you're grabbing that drive again and holding on tight to it.

Seeing how smart Dr. Wily is is always a great reminder on just how he and Dr. Light achieved such a project as large as the Hero Base. Among many other projects in their past.

Zasz's new domain is described so well, can really visualise it and it hits all the marks one would come to expect from this aspect of sci-fi stories.

I really love how much fun you having writing the things Kefka comes out with. It's so easy to visualise him and hear his voice from Dissidia. Character voices always feel so distinct and easy to visualise when you write them. Sabek for example. Crazy how you were able to take one of my many random characters and handle him well like this. Even managing to capture the Rupert Giles inspiration with the way he speaks.

Love how you've done the developing Medi scenes over the past few chapters to the moment in this chapter itself. A concept that originally came far late in the original versions and now you get to spend some good time on it. The classic top-down/bottom-up AI concept is always interesting and I love how you dive into it. There's going to be a lot of tension and drama.

The script that was set up is changing even more. Both in-universe and out, and I'm enjoying seeing where you're taking all this. Especially as always with Richard's plans and that last scene with Chad.

Keep at it, buddy. Can't wait for more.
9/6/2020 c7 4Darth Necron
Ah glad your back , lets see how fate unfolds today.

Well, start off with some hardcore intimacy but the good times don't last as Doctor Wily's kidnapping proves to be quite the buzzkill, doh.

I see the trauma has started to get into Chad's head. Well, if it was earlier in the year I might have said he was letting the fear get to him, but, well, these days everyone's jumpy I suppose, and at least Chad's jumpy to something that has a shape.

Anywho, seems we got a lot of vampire trouble today, I don't suppose any Belmonts, Jostars, or anyone related to Blade or Hellsing are around eh?

Vampire Lords...after getting through the Blood and Wine DLC in Witcher 3 recently, wonder if Regis would be able to keep these vampires in line lol, oh well, we will see how many stakes it takes to keep down these pack of trouble making blood suckers down.

Still, on top of that , Kefka's going to have a bigger role in the chaos, clear he's been hanging around with a rather high level legion of doom, guess we will see if he's going to cause anyone in this Broken Universe to go Dancing Mad by the time he's through, lol, we will see.

Wonder if Nyu recovering will lead to some full Elifen Lied insanity , well, now that she's Lucy, sounds like one way or another things are about to take off, we will just see if those on the ride will have there heads by the end of it.

Laserman's showing the Vampires who's boss, but we will see if it will be as easy for their boss. Well, only one way to find out so, another fun chapter, keep up the good work, stay safe, and till next time.
11/17/2018 c6 Darth Necron
Ah nice another update. And we get a updated situation about Chad's origins to boot, at least this realities Chad. Well, something tells me that Chad might not like being enlightened with this but we will see.

Well, for now he seems to be getting along with" Ruth" but we will see how long this good feeling lasts.

Meanwhile, glad to see the original Megaman 's legacy with a vintage Wily castle, the old traps are still some of the hardiest ones to overcome I suppose.

Damn, intense revelation about some of the family history for Richard, well at least one half a Richard I suppose, curious if we will be getting more unpleasant family reunions, guess we will see but good to know Zero's still around somewhere, wonder if that means Megaman X or Sigma are to.

Meanwhile, deities seem keen on giving Chad hell, this can't be good. Blue almost came close to causing "Ruth" some major mental trauma but thankfully that was adverted.

But Doctor Richard went through a very intense series of trauma , and surprisingly enough it was not from a castle trap but just eroding infrastructure...if only it was a invisible block lol.

Well, thankfully Nyu thought fast, long as his new spine does not suddenly explode the next day.

Meanwhile, despite not getting any injuries seems Chad's the one in worst shape with Richard playing some messed up mind games. Is Richard faking him out or preparing a brutal counterattack? Well, something tells me we will find out soon.

Not like things are tense enough with Ellie learning more about Chad, just as his dark side came crashing in to cause more trouble, doh.

Well, another intense chapter that made some of the puzzles in this story a tad clearer, quite hyped to see how things go so keep up the great work and till next time.
9/24/2018 c5 Darth Necron
Heh, we at last got this story's version of Blue eh? Seems to share a lot with Game Masters Blue but with more" Combat" experience. And, as the son of Doctor Light, does that make him more like Megaman or Protoman? Well,

Super Children eh? Almost sounds like Newtype's from Gundam, or many others. Is Elie suppose to be one of those? Guess we will see.

So, we got a child that causes painful memories to surface...is it Raven? Someone else form Elfin Lied?

...the girl from the Ring? Well, we will see.

Well, Angelus got repelled for now but it seems like this is just a warm up before the real dark outburst.

Well, we will see if Elie can be protected without Trigon running wild, depends on if a enhanced Slade shows up and starts throwing fire around next chapter lol.

Another intense chapter, keep up the great work man and till next time.
5/8/2018 c4 Darth Necron
Heh, damn man I feel like I been slacking off since you been updating faster then me lol. Not that I mind as this was another epic chapter.

Lets see, up first, heh, that does not happen to be Shadow's Maria? Ah, could be others lol.

So Blue IS in this story eh? Haha, for a while I thought he was Le Blue but then I realized it was someone else, wonder how he and Chad will interact in this one.

Speaking of reunions, well, never a good way to catch up by saying you killed someone close to them, could be more then a little awkward.

Meanwhile, Axel always makes things more fun, good to know Roxas is not chained down to Sora, but, what about Ven and Ventas? Guess I'll see soon enough lol.

Well, got to see a fun clash between Axel and Terra...you know that reminds me...Xemnas and Xehanort being around at the same time eh? Well, this its just post Dream Drop anyway lol.

Still, is this Daxch suppose to be Sora? Not sure if I forgot.

Well, Chad seems to have even worst credibility then America after are current self absorbed idiot bails out of a treaty because he's a petty man child who can only feel good destroying everything around him like, whops...guess emotions are still strong today lol.

Short version, seems like its going to be a uphill struggle to win her over, hopefully he can do it in time.

Meanwhile, Richard is having quite a intense chat with his" Better" Half. If only chats with Bruce Banner and the Hulk could be so civil lol, looks like Chad's going to be stuck for a wild ride yet, hope he can survive with his sanity intact.

Meanwhile, so many damn things keep happening in Unicron's head, good thing he's not in it anymore lol .

Well, looks like quite a lot is going to unfold so excited to see were it leads. Till next time keep up the great work and till next time, Nyu indeed. ( Alerts Bando about another loose diclonius and runs before getting ripped apart. )
5/2/2018 c3 Darth Necron
I see Roll's "awakening" is causing quite a lot of stress, oy. Damn, guess this Roll had a traumatic nightmarish legacy, seems about right lol.

We had another dramatic nightmare again, Sephiroth sure loves those...but now we are entering Elfen Lied with Nyu eh? Guess a lot of dudes are going to ripped up, better bring a umbrella.

Well, Richard's getting in Chad's head, and at least one of his versions is causing trouble, ugh this reminds me of Zoom and Savitar form the Flash show, hopefully Chad does not cause Flashpoint lol.

Arg, Sephiroth got off screen killed? He got done dirty, unless its a trap.

So Kefka's going to go up to bat next? We will see if he strikes out in a explosive manner or not soon enough, should be fun.

So, Elie's in this story as well eh? Lets see if she has better luck then her sister, we will see.

Well, another intense chapter, keep up the great work and till next time.
4/23/2018 c2 Darth Necron
And we start off to see how Rufus is doing being all super space emperor. And the verdict is, being on top makes for a lot of people going for your throat, we will see if Rufus shares the fate he gave Dante.

And so now Chad has the same corruption powers that well, Chad's Gamemasters Chad has?

This will get explosive, and on top of that Lucy indeed acts like Lucy from Elfin Lied, if she has another personality everyone around her is going to die painfully lol.

Also, and after that dramatic death Chaos is back? Something seems off, is it a clone or Chaos from another reality? If its the same one, he must be able to cheat death as much as Reverse Flash to bounce back from getting his soul erased.

Well, he might be lucky but Phantom is not, sorry Phantom, you got the demonic spider repellent smashed into you.

And after all the dark soul antics now Chad has a even more direct Dark Soul to deal with, should have gone to Dagobah lol.

Angelus seems like its going to be trouble, not sure if Roll becoming...Ruth is some way to set up even more tragic pain but only one way to find out. Either way, keep up the great work and till next time may the writing force be with you.
4/23/2018 c1 Darth Necron
Ah damn did not think you would update so soon, was not sure if it would be part of the old story lol but glad you got your groove back man.

Firstly, heh, so Blue owns Slashman and not Capcom eh? Must have been a sweet deal.

Ah, and so Optimus Prime and Primal both got it wrong about Primus, dude was more angry then Unicron lol.

Nice more incite to the lore from Multiverse, shape that godly family tension nicely. Also, I see the gang at Hero base seems more or less the same, alas, including the very hostile relationship that this Chad and Richard currently have.

Damn, Chad's still haunted by his failure clearly, and to bad for him he's not a Sayian so his power does not increase so easily.

Well, with all this tension, lets introduce Lucy eh? Well, with the other girls he likes dead she has a window of opportunity but she seems vastly different then her counterpart in Game Masters, we will see how things go with that.

And on top of everything else, good old Sephiroth is up to trouble so this should be fun.

Well, a intense start to the new saga man, hope it takes off well and till next time, or, more like to the next chapter lol.

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