7/11/2018 c1 4Mary the Canary
Wow! That last sentence especially was powerful. You depict Claude so well. I think, in his own, twisted way, he does love her, but above all he needs her to need him. I love how you wrote this scene; Claude, so desperate to make her need him, is willing to commit sin - murder, or attempt thereof - to gain her affections.
Wow! That last sentence especially was powerful. You depict Claude so well. I think, in his own, twisted way, he does love her, but above all he needs her to need him. I love how you wrote this scene; Claude, so desperate to make her need him, is willing to commit sin - murder, or attempt thereof - to gain her affections.
6/15/2018 c1 deletedaccountchanrip
Ah, Claude. Ever so tragically blind to your own hypocrisy until you've been dragged too far down by the clutches of human sinfulness. Funny how I, a person who just recently left Christianity, am so morbidly fascinated with the mind of this man who sort of represents some of the main prroblems I had with it that.
I really love this, I hope you'll continue it at some point, but no pressure. This also gave me an idea regarding the relationship between two characters in a story I'm working on and their interactions as they start to interact later on.
Ah, Claude. Ever so tragically blind to your own hypocrisy until you've been dragged too far down by the clutches of human sinfulness. Funny how I, a person who just recently left Christianity, am so morbidly fascinated with the mind of this man who sort of represents some of the main prroblems I had with it that.
I really love this, I hope you'll continue it at some point, but no pressure. This also gave me an idea regarding the relationship between two characters in a story I'm working on and their interactions as they start to interact later on.