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1/2 c15 Guest2021
Poor Jareth! Thanks for the update.
1/2 c5 1CrookedClover
This is good. I love the Aramok. Just one inconsistency though... How would they know who Sarah is? She did not reveal her identity to the Aramok. They wouldn't be able to find her connections.
1/2 c2 CrookedClover
I'm enjoying this so far. My, Sarah is a sassy one!
12/31/2020 c15 6WhatisWithin
I had a mild moment of panic when I saw the **end** at the end of the chapter. Luckily I continued in the author's note.
Anyhoo! We get to see Jareth's perpective! He really ought to invite more humans into the Labyrinth. Then maybe he'd see that he isn't so odd in having two sides after all. ;)
12/16/2020 c14 Guest 2020
Intense adventures in the last couple of chapters. Very exciting.
I'm glad to see Sarah finally loosening her rigidity enough to allow a degree of warmth towards Jareth.
Thanks.
12/15/2020 c1 Loreley
Just read it all at once. It's great! Please more...
12/13/2020 c14 Guest
Literally shrieked with excitment when I saw you had updated! Eeeeh! What a good chapter. Jareth also finally gets to drop the metallica shirt.
12/14/2020 c14 5FelineNinjaGrace
Thank you for updating! Loooooved the chapter! It wa stood to see Jarketh saving Sarah for once, lol. I mean...yeah, he saved her other times but then she had to turn around and save him immediately! So it was nice that he didn’t faint from all the magic used.
Anyways, I love this story! Glad you’re updating so frequently now! The chapter was too short though! I would have liked to read it for a lot longer!
11/26/2020 c13 6WhatisWithin
Whoooooa! LOVING this story! Blew threw the whole thing in a few hours! Hope for a new update soon! :)
I especially love your characterization of Jareth, and how your incorporating Fae mythology into the story.
11/21/2020 c13 FelineGrace
Hooray! Finally you updated! I wondered where you went!
9/1/2020 c12 1Shieldmaiden124
I am really enjoying this story! I love how you make Jareth true to his character and yet so out of place in this setting. That must be a trick to pull off at times. I'm loving it! Please keep it coming! I can't wait to see what happens next!
6/12/2020 c12 Guest
Oh gosh I hope you kept this up. It’s delicious!
6/13/2020 c12 4Thevoiceslockedaway
Pretty good so far. Some small errors that would benefit from a beta.
6/9/2020 c12 FelineGrace
YUUUUUUSSSSS! Another chapter! And so soon! Thank you thank you thank you! It was a little too short though, in my opinion :D
6/9/2020 c12 Guest 2020
Sarah is remarkably resistant to giving recognition to her own feelings. I wonder why this is so. Thanks for the update.
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