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8/23/2018 c35 2ayslio
A wrap up of what is to be, post Predacons Rising. It was quite enjoyable, although a couple times, it was difficult for me to pick this fanfic up again to continue where I left off. I suggest working on the careful enticing of blending "hooking the reader in" as well neutrally balancing in action and dialogue. I feel as if I am reading a monologue with sentiments punched in. XD It was enjoyable to read the character development among different characters, including Starscream, Knock Out, and Bumblebee's role as President of Cybertron.

The final fall of the Decepticons as their last attempt to bring a new era of War was quite interesting. Though, I was confused on Megatron's state of mind before his demise. In my own personal view/opinion, he seemed more dead rather than alive, empty and hollow, yet accepting the way it is and the hopeless fact of being lost in his own delusions. In a way, it seemed he wanted to die so he can escape everything he had brought upon himself and for the fall of Cybertron.

Soundwave's betrayal was long hinted from the beginning. Who knew he would finally snap? But of course, it brings in the natural factor everyone has a breaking point. Not even the most loyal can stand after seeing their leader corrupted in their own delusions, can finally throw their leader out and watch their demise.

Knock Out's character was interesting to track, as he has changed, yet, knowing he has been manipulated and under the influence of the Decepticons for a long time, a message springs out "Old habits die hard." And just so, he did, slowly and surely.

Starscream's was the most interesting to read out of all. The Seeker seemed to worship Optimus, even after the Prime's demise. Yet, it was his pride and personality getting in the way, failing to see why and how. He would do anything, and due to his faults and mistakes in the past, it would be understandable why it would be difficult to trust a Seeker who had betrayed and decieved both ex-factions for so long. I see there is a sequel to this, so I would be moving onto the next one, tracking Starscream's character development and change. His optics changing from red to blue were also intriguing. Hatred at birth eh? I wonder what happened in his childhood to have his optics change to red so quickly.

Thank you for writing this fanfic.
7/14/2018 c35 89Miru Mangetsu
No tenes idea de cuánto voy a extra?ar este fic y sus actualizaciones diarias. Literalmente me dabas fuerza para vivir, ya no sé que haré con mis días...

Lloré demasiado con Starscream. Su soledad, descenso a la locura y la esperanza rota cuando se dio cuenta que Skywarp no estaba en sus cabales. No sirvió que estuviera escuchando música triste (? Pero bueno eso no lo elijo yo sino el reproductor, en fin. La caída de los Decepticons fue abrumadora, creo sinceramente que sí Soundwave se lo hubiera tomado con más calma el resultado habría sido muy diferente. Me quedé con las ganas de más cassettes jajaja.

Te pondré en alerta para historias futuras realmente amé todo lo que leí desde el impresionante primer capítulo hasta este prometedor pero triste final. Triste porque a pesar de todo Screamer todavía no encontró su lugar en el mundo y todo lo que tuvo que sufrir. Realmente adoro a ese jet idiota jajaja

En notas aparte todavía no me quedó muy claro si Soundwave sobrevivió o no (? Ojalá que si porque lo amo también.

Esto es todo. Gracias por darle alegrías a todos mis días y lamento no poder retribuirte en tu idioma pero la verdad soy muy mala escribiendo en inglés (llanto).

Espero leerte en otra cosa que sé que será igual de estupenda que Red Haze. Saludos
7/13/2018 c29 Starfire201
*shakes head* Soundwave may have believed he thought things through, but I suspect that Skywarp's idea of sneaking around might have borne more fruit. I think Megatron would have enjoyed it if he could have known that Soundwave didn't live for very long after his betrayal, and proved a failure. He just moved too quickly and with too few numbers.
7/13/2018 c29 9Gatomongamer
How did the Decepticons keep the war going as long as they did? They're just a mess without Megatron, you could say the same about the Autobots but they're managing well enough with Mr President. Who knows what Soundwave's real plan is now that the Decepticon force is him, Skywarp and Starscream or if he's even still alive.
7/12/2018 c26 89Miru Mangetsu
Comentaré en espa?ol a partir de ahora porque el otro día tarde varias horas en traducir mi propio comentario jajaja, espero no te moleste.
Por donde empezar hoy? Ratbat, Buzzsaw y Ravage hacen su esperada aparición y no puedo estar más feliz, y supongo que Soundwave va a robarse a Rumble y Frenzy. Por fin estará completo con sus simbiontes, hermoso.
Una cosa que me ha parecido curiosa desde el principio es la apatia de Skywarp, es raro porque sé que es Skywarp pero me agrada más así... No lo sé. Y Shockwave sigue siendo un perfecto comodín, fiel a su estilo jajaja.
Sigo dolida por Megs... Y eso que ni siquiera es de mis favoritos.
En fin, espero por más y siempre ed un placer leer este fic
Hasta el que viene.
7/11/2018 c25 Coira94
I hope that starscream will became a custody
7/11/2018 c23 Miru Mangetsu
Megatron died... again?! I didn't see it coming neither what happened with Soundwave at first i thought that he had thrown Starscream off the bridge because he represented everything that was wrong with the decepticons and all of the mistakes megs made, but no. I like that Soundwave wants to be upfront and show off contrary to a few of his interpretations.
On the other hand poor starscream. I love him... But he's pathetic. I hope his time to shine comes.
Knock Out development is perfect, it doesnt feel forced , amazingly natural.
I want today's upload (?.
Thank you so much
7/9/2018 c21 9Gatomongamer
I'm one fell swoop Soundwave has gotten rid of Megatron and Starscream Staffers and secured himself leader of what remains of the deceptions. Something tells me he's gonna regret sending them away together though.
7/9/2018 c21 Working Girl
This is really good so far. Curses for ending on a cliffy like this.
7/9/2018 c21 89Miru Mangetsu
if you don't continue thit soon, i think i will die

i love this story, please give me more

sorry for the bad languaje, i don't speak english so good jeje
7/3/2018 c14 Guest
Oh man Soundwave! This is not good! Also I love the crossover with Lockdown from the live action movies. I can just imagine what that ship looks like buy more in TFP u iverse style! So cool!
7/1/2018 c12 Guest
I can't wait for the next chapter! Omg hope the kids will be okay!?
6/27/2018 c11 Guest
Ah man he fought so hard too... :.(

Ratchet please hurry!
6/22/2018 c9 3AskDrKnockout
I'm really enjoying this story so far! I love the interaction with KO and the kids! Looking forward to the next chapter! :D
5/24/2018 c1 coira94
very interesting

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