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11/8/2020 c22 1TPfreak
So great! Sorry I haven't checked in for the past few chapters but I've really enjoyed them. It was funny to hear Karigan described as having a voice lovely despite its flaws when I tend to think of her as tone deaf from the books. Loved the dynamics with ZK at the ball and giving her old bullies a comeuppance. I miss Laren so I hope she shows up soon but I did find this chapter from Henri's perspective interesting. I look forward to reading more!
10/25/2020 c22 jackson16
Excellent. I was hoping Estora would support Karigan. That will go a long way with Courte I think.
9/23/2020 c19 jackson16
Great chapter. The long term reactions should be interesting. I must say, I really dislike Mirwell. I do hope there are no troubles in Courte.
9/23/2020 c19 7ayera
I loooove this! so thankful that you take your time to write this. Can’t wait for the next chapter!
9/7/2020 c18 Guest
awesome updates!thanks for sharing!
9/5/2020 c18 1TPfreak
So I just binge read both your Green Rider stories and I loved them. It's too bad you don't seem to have finished this one but I know it's all too common with fanfic. I realize you may not have even thought about this website or this story in a while but I just wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed it.

I felt the characters were pretty true in the beginning but as you delved into your own plot and your own version of events they changed and molded to the story without losing too much of themselves and becoming unrecognizable. I really appreciated that you had a clear vision for the series and an actual plot, not just a bunch of fluff or plot devices that didn't make sense. I loved having the Kmaern brought back, this big evil magic that we don't know too much about, and of course the political world, trying to navigate a way to make it possible for K/Z to get married.

I do think there's a bit more that could be fleshed out in the last few chapters that wasn't as well explored as it could have been (Laren being sent on an errand but not seeing her reaction, Alton's attack but not hearing anything about him after he got drunk even though weeks seem to go by as Karigan recovers afterwards, not hearing anything about Quinn's confession to his wife or how things will go with adding Xavier to his life...). And of course many questions left unanswered simply because the story is unfinished.

I also got a bit exasperated with Karigan always getting the wrong idea about Zachary, it would be fun if maybe the roles were reversed at some point. Maybe if she was getting extra weapons training with the Black Shields or something. I would have really loved to see more of their public courtship once things were announced, while still learning more about the dark moonstone and this voice in Zachary's head and the dark force that took over Alton. It was all very compelling!

Anyway, all that to say I really enjoyed it and if you ever decide to post more of it, I will be back to read it!

All the best,
K
9/4/2020 c18 Canha
Always a pleasure to read a new chapter! It is sweet to see the love of this two by the eyes of Mara.
8/29/2020 c18 jackson16
Yay! An update! This is a great story. How often will it be updated? I have not been closely following.
6/17/2020 c14 Guest
Great update! Thanks for sharing. Please update again soon
6/8/2020 c14 Guest
I loved Quinn's entrance. So dramatic though I hope that Xavier comes back. That little boy did wonders for our favorite couple.

I'm looking forward to seeing how Zachary goes about gaining support from the lord governors. There are so many possibilities and I look forward to the one you choose.

Please don't let Alton be forever possessed! Of everyone, I feel like he got the short end of the stick. But! I also understand why.

I'm looking forward to more! Thank you for these two wonderful chapters!
WS
5/16/2020 c11 Guest
I'm so very glad you updated this. I've been looking forward to a new chapter for awhile.
2/1/2020 c1 Guest
Love the new update, spanner in the works with Estoras response. This is very well written, a nice change for fanfic!
1/10/2019 c7 unicorndancer
Anxiously awaiting the next chapter! I just reread both this and Dark Magic. love them both!
10/25/2018 c7 Myelline
I'm so happy to see a sequel ! and so happy that Kari doesn't make the same mistake :D
Thank you :D
9/3/2018 c6 1katrina3198
Thanks for the update, very exciting plot development!
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