7/6/2018 c1 79Flaming Trails
Nice! Very simple, but you can clearly feel Alice's growing rage and determination as she confronts the Dollmaker/Bumby. She's done with hiding, done with denial, and she is going to set things as right as she can. I like the use of the quotes from the game too. Feels like she's flashing back to all these important moments and using them to push herself onward. Good job!
Nice! Very simple, but you can clearly feel Alice's growing rage and determination as she confronts the Dollmaker/Bumby. She's done with hiding, done with denial, and she is going to set things as right as she can. I like the use of the quotes from the game too. Feels like she's flashing back to all these important moments and using them to push herself onward. Good job!