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12/22 c66 11Vangran
I look forward to seeing the Palace wrapped up. Something that always bothered me was that Okumura's shadow didn't disappear like all the others after they finished talking, giving Akechi plenty of time to kill him. Every other one they started running as soon as the palace started deteriorating. Wings of Rebellion did a good job showing what it would be like if he survived, and so does the 3rd Semester, the former is one person's opinion and the latter is by my reckoning a concept given form. Like with Futaba's mom showing up. Otherwise Yusuke's mother would have appeared alongside his sensei. It was what they wanted. They WANTED Wakaba back so an idealized version was created. Same with Makoto's dad. Maybe they really were like that, but I feel that it was just how they idolized their family. Like with Madarame in one of the Royal endings. As time goes by we as people tend to forget facets of our loved ones in favor of the parts we liked, but that is a disservice because it is not the whole picture of who they were.

So after that odd rabbit hole, I once again say I look forward to seeing how you do will handle the end of this Palace.
12/22 c66 Ruby
See you next year!
12/17 c65 LordKirkleton
It's been a long while since I read this fic, and I did the same thing as last time, too... staying up to wee hours of the morning to finish all that's out lmaooooo. I haven't played royal yet so I tried to force myself to skip anything mentioning Takuto but unfortunately glimpsed some anwyay rip. On another note YEEEEEE I cheered so hard seeing you decided to go foe the Namine x Yusuke ship :D And as before, it is a super slow burn. I'm so damn curious about what's going to be done about Akechi... like if he's still the black masked persona user (surely he is?) So many things to find out, time will tell! Anyway, thanks for the good read as always I'll be back to read someday again xD
12/5 c65 Vangran
I like it! And the explanation for Adam was perfect as well. It does make sense with Azazoth being a psuedo-Persona because of Shido's schemes working against him. I also look forward to Yuri and Itsuki showing up, those two are always a fun read and might help them trust adults a little more. After all, not every adult is evil, they just happen to have their fair share of ones that are.
12/5 c65 1Defender31415
Well, for the second time in two days, I can say without joking that I never saw something P5 related coming. First Scramble’s release date (it’s in February) and now Maruki joining the Phantom Thieves... that was awesome by the way.
11/10 c64 11Vangran
This is great! I love the difference from the game, and I hope that Akechi's words are honest and not a new ploy. And the story of the soldier was quite remarkable in execution and timing as that would be the time to be aiming for Shido's head, but they know now that revenge is hollow, and as they say, when you set out, remember to dig two graves.
9/23 c63 1Defender31415
Awesome job! I want a Persona 5 Twilight anime now.

Nice to see the wrap-up from Hisashi.

Thinking about Maruki’s conversation with Namine, that seemed pretty deep for just rank 1. On the one hand, it’s Maruki; on the other hand, you probably need to accelerate his confidant if you want to do third semester stuff. It’s roughly September now, going by events, and Maruki leaves in November.

After everything Namine said about her parents, and especially what Sojiro added, I was thinking they’d be perfect for a greed based Palace, but Okumura has that covered. Can they at least get a Mementos chamber?

I liked the scenes with Iwai and Sae- checking confidant ranks off the list!

And some nice romance at the end! Namine and Yusuke are still a slow burn, but the flames are getting hotter. As for Ryuji and Ann, there’s good reason to think that is possible. Exactly why is spoilers though!

Wonderful work as usual! I eagerly await these every month (even if I forget to review sometimes)!
9/23 c62 Defender31415
Excellently done. I liked how Hisashi was so different from the Thieves’ typical targets. Confidants seem to be proceeding at a good pace.
9/23 c61 Defender31415
Nice job. As far as I can tell, Ann has the only armor that is even remotely... let’s just say alluring, so Makoto, Futaba and Haru are off the hook. (Haru in particular is more elegant than anything.) Excellent showcasing of some of the challenges of Okumura’s Palace as well, particularly the hunger status- that Palace’s main annoyance. Does Futaba really go to school as early as her second rank? I can’t remember.
9/23 c63 5Tora Lych
I'm always so happy when one of these gets related.
9/6 c62 Tora Lych
Also, I forgot to ask in my last review,
Are we maxing out all the confidants?
9/6 c60 Tora Lych
I doubt you go back to this chapter, but you Put Iwais name twice in the confidant list. (Chapter 60)
It's also freaking stupid how a lot of the things you write before Royal came out, happened in his story.
9/5 c62 11Vangran
Nice use of 3rd Semester requests (unless I'm mistaken). I remember there being one where a guy is upset because he kept hurting his sister and wanted to die, so I think this is it. I like how you did it and I look forward to seeing the Yusuke romance come out. Usually it's Ryuji or Akechi, so this is a pleasant surprise.
8/24 c61 ShadowAsh Senpai
I'm so happy you decided to have Yusuke as Namine's love interest. Yusuke recently replaced Akihiko Sanada as not only my favorite Persona character but my favorite video game character of all time! I am really enjoying this fanfic so far.
7/30 c60 1Defender31415
Good work. I’ll be interested in seeing how the Judgement Arcana develops, since you can’t go along with canon. I’m also curious as to what you’ll be doing with those girls Namine and Makoto met up with- sounds like a perfect source of a Mementos request. I guess I am not surprised by Okumura’s stubbornness- he still has a Palace, after all. As for Yusuke, I’m curious to see where things go. He’s on rank 7, and romance typically happens at rank 9. There was a passing mention of Akechi- guess he has a confidant event coming up too.
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