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3/25 c9 Guest
Upgrade some more pls
3/10 c9 Guest
Hope to see you next chapter hopefully sooner
3/6 c9 Blacktiger93
I'm glad to see you're writing again! X3
I really enjoyed this chapter and all the excitement in it!
I look forward to seeing what's planned next.
Till next time!

PS: If you ever wanna bounce ideas around with someone, feel free to shoot me a message.<3
2/10 c8 Blacktiger93
I think your story is great!

It's surprisingly hard to find good ElixOc fics out there, so I was happy to see one here. The set up is pretty good so far but the timing of things regarding the series is just a little unclear. Maybe you can elaborate on this in later chapters to help cement when this is taking place.

Also, maybe you can give Kida some time to explore Slugterra a little before she meets with Eli. Don't misunderstand, I'm personally looking forward to when she does. I just think it will give Kida a chance to become more connected to the slugs there,and also gain a personal understanding for why Eli kept this from her.

Either way, I understand if life for you is busy at the moment, but I do hope you will get the chance to update again soon! I'll be waiting XD
1/21 c8 Guest
Your story rocks and your writing is really good.. there's a natural flow in it and the plot keeps getting more appealing and interesting... It's also amazing that there are still slugterra fans who keep the show alive, and care for the show itself, and not for the video games and toys.. a strong mature fanbase is all needed! Hope everything goes well for you and you continue writing! Literally can't wait to see what happens next! Greetings and support from Greece!
11/3/2020 c7 Guest
This was amazing but...im scared fhis was updated in 2019...please dont let this die i love it to much
10/22/2020 c1 Guest
This set-up is so good! XD
4/29/2020 c7 SplashSJQ
LOVE LOVE LOVE. The story keep going!
4/11/2020 c7 1GUIPA
Ok, I know I reviewed when you updated but after re-reading(more than once) I feel like I need to; I couldn’t help but feel bad for Kida, her social life is a train wreck, having to deal with bullies and uncaring adults who don’t give a shit if Kida was defending herself, and her genuine friendship with Eli was just so beautiful, to an extent that he was the person who mattered the most to her and his departure hurt her so much, her meeting Banter was great and the little hoverbug made me smile so much; I also think she’s the only person Eli contemplated telling about Sluggerra to, which comes to show how much she mattered to him. I can’t wait until they reunite, and am really looking forward to it.
Also, does this story take place before or after the Burning world episode, because if it’s after him explaining about Kida to the gang will be easier
12/21/2019 c7 LazyCloud01
An update! A wonderful chapter, and I don’t hand out compliments easily. Nor do I review very often, but this story is gold in the Slugterra fandom. Love Kida and Banter, and I can’t wait for her reunion with Eli. Although, if she’s still with Twist... that’ll be extra interesting. Can’t tell if Twist is genuine or not right now, but I guess time will tell. Keep up the good work!
12/21/2019 c7 GUIPA
Let me guess, the ‘good Samaritan’ is Twist, right? I mean, blonde with blue eyes? Questioned if they also named their slugs? The reunion between him, Kida and Eli is not going to be pretty
11/4/2019 c6 GUIPA
Will you continue the story?
10/23/2019 c6 Guest
GREAT POST FASTER PLZ
8/5/2019 c6 15KiaraDuman
please please update, I really want to know what happens
7/17/2019 c6 Guest
A guy on a horse mecha. Who could it be? I’m loving this. ;)
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